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ARGGHHH!!!! Ms. BeccaAmon!! WHen are you
going to update!!! We the readers.... waiting...
so long for loved chapter... *starts crying*
Amagad please hurry the update!
Need New CHAPTER O..O
*freaks out* I've read the other
chapters...god knows how many times,
anticipating a new one chap! Omgg
Please update ;_;
LOYAL OBSESSED READER HERE!
xo rhichan xo
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Wooo! Bravo!


I generally don't make it through multichapter fics, but this one held my interest.
Bravo.
Though, I had sex in a car like that once, and had significantly more trouble with the stickshift.
XD!
Bravo, Again.

-Pupslut.-

This is one of the most amazing fanfictions I've erad in a long time. I usually don't like reading stuff on AFF.net- but this story is just too wonderfully written to pass up! The plot line kept me trembling- If i wasn't so distracted while reading it (Stupid homework and pursuing mothers) I would've cried- more than once. The plot up until two chapters ago was just as intense as the real manga- and that stupid thing made me want to throm my computor across the room. Once again, Amazing story! Wonderful plot!

I sence a new energy in this,you do not disapoint.I love the sympathy between the boys and that odd moment where Itachi felt like Naruto,Itachi stayed soft and sasuke has no bad sexual memories (or good) of Itachi ..yet.. so I got a good feeling for the future of sasuke's connection with Naruto at least.His father sounds gross,no wonder Itachi left.It would be nice to see what Itachi does in this reality with himself..a side fic or PWP or a whole story,it is satisfying to care for your characters.Thank you so much.I look forward to reading more about this relationship esp. the sex,you do rimming and other "real" stuff,its a turn on..fisting or spanking anyone? I loved the car sex to say the least...

I forgot to add the best of all in this series is all the kissing,neck munching and support/affection they give eah other,it is totally right,non sugery and plain facinating.I never get bored of this balence between raunch and high standard.

Very much the best still very hot and thick with emotion I love it. You write this story very well. Can't wait to see what more you're going to write about.

Chapter 29 was really cute. I liked it a lot. I really hope that Itachi and Sasuke will get closer in the future, and as they seem to be on their way, I think I'm gonna get my wish. I love their relationship so much. Not Uchiha-cest wise, but brotherly love wise. My favorite relationship in the series.

I hope Itachi does something to pay Sasuke and Naruto back. I'd love it. Would probably laugh my ass off. XD

this story is so romantic(shudders) its not that i dont like it, love it actually, wonder what would happen next i mean orochimaru must have been pissed right?, and gaara and his siblings havent showed up yet... well they are gonna show up right? shino and kiba? well ill leave them as that, i hope that there would be a sasunarugaar part on the next chapter, i really like that love triangle, well this is a great fic, just that the plots a little mild, put a lot more action on it, like the sng i was talkin bout, and i guess itll really pick up, great job with the lemons by the way, gambatte on the next chapter update soon ne? ^_^.

hey! awesome chapter! ive been waiting for it and i have to say that i'm very pleased XD

OMFG OMFG I HATE YOU SO MUCH! U FRUSTRATE ME U EVIL AUTHOR! WHY DID U MAKE THIS FIC!!! I SPENT HOURS READING THIS WITH PATIENCE AND FINALLY WHEN THE PROBLEMS START OFF- IT LEAVES NARUTO SEEMING ALL INNOCENT AND YOU DONT EVEN HAVE THE DECENCY TO MAKE SASUKE COME BACK BEGGGGINGG! (emphesis on begging) DO YOU KNOW HOW SLOW I READ AND HOW MUCH I WAS DYING TO SEE SASUKE SUFFER!!!!!!! GOD I HATE YOUUUU I HATE YOUUU SOOOO MUCHHHHH .. *roars* *cries* *dies* EVIL BASTURDDDDDDDDDD *slaps you with a spatula* DIEEEE DIEEE DIEEEEEEE.. well make sure u make sasuke beg SOMETIME in the story or else u will lose ur currently #2 fan. THATS RIGHT #2!!!!! u know why i'm not #1???? becuz u DISAPPOINTED ME!!! *slaps you*

2 hours later : me in a calmer state:
well overall its kept my heart pounding and you did a real nice job. i actually got TIRED of the intense... *couth* loving :D u put so much in and at random times too.. i was like wtf >.>;; teehehee but its been awhile since i was realli into the actual plot instead of all the intense hot stuff.. so thumbs up on that.. but the only thing i was realy disappointed in (i noted up there) is how sasuke is soo MEAN (that basturd) to naruto and he gets away with it by simply showing up at his doorstep. that really annoys me cuz in all the storys i read - this happens and it completely spoils it for me. but im willing to stick to ur story to the end! cuz i'm oh so incredibly nice and in love with this story. yes i blabber and i talk alot and i just cant seem to shut up.. forgive me! good bye my love(r)

-from: girl #03