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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Sukara
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CRIPES!!! I read the whole thing!!! ...well.....I stopped at chatper seven, then started again only to end at 25, then few months later here I am ^_^ xDI was too sad to see what would happen int hose bad times ;-; It makes me...and cry...I hope...Naruto or Sasuke don't die....Sasuke's parents die though..Dun care about htem xD Stupud bastards!! xD
person Keaira
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. This update was definitely worth the wait. I love the happiness lately. After all that angst, I honestly needed it. Your story is what forced me to write an angsty one-shot of my own, actually. I've really gotten into it, to the point that I was honestly in tears when I read the chapters before this one and the last one. Your writing is so realistic that it draws your readers in, and you actually feel for the characters. I'm glad that Itachi seems to be warming up, and that things are good between Sasuke and Naruto again. But you've also kept things realistic. Sasuke's life isn't suddenly perfect just because he's stayed with Naruto. He still has problems, but Naruto is helping him deal with them, as is Itachi, apparently. Keep up the good work, and I'll be hoping for more happiness from this fic XD
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YIPPIE!! Gimme more! Gimme more chapters!! ^_^
person LtF
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's so sweet!! <3 Itachi in this chapter >o< And.. fufufuf >///< Sasunaru all the way XDDD Glad you're still updating; I know it takes a long time to get a chapter going and edited and written and all that crap! Keep up the good work (as always, your writing is fantastic, superb, brilliant, blah blah blah *dies* )!
person rhichan
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg this chapter is awsome!! Sex..in Itachi's car!
Omfg thats great! I cant wait for your next chapter,
I hope its not that long of a wait as the last one was!
Ok ok See ya then
xo rhi xox
person ghostninja85
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that Itachi was going to turn into a half-decent person in this fic, and I'm glad that this chapter basically confirmed it for me. It looks like he couldn't take their parents BS either, and decided to deal with it in a less destructive way than in canon.

Sasuke's re-entry into Konoha High School and his reaffirmation of his commitment to Naruto was perfectly done as well. I really really love this fic.

Update as soon as you can! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person lillilly
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, you finally updated, and that chapter was soo good. I like that your are opening up the range of each character, keep up the good work!!
person Anon
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU'RE BACK!!! I missed you!!

Anyway, awesome chapter. The beginning I was a bit confused until I realized they were playing tic-tac-toe. Cute! I like how you didn't make Itachi a total bastard, why I like that, I don't know. As always I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work. Oh and congrats for winning over at TONFA!
person fyredevyl
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter (ch. 31)! I'm so happy you updated. You have a great style of writing that makes the story so much more enjoyable. I can't wait for more. Give me more, More, MORE!!! ^_^
person clarechan
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
squeeeeeeee!!!! thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou! *is horribly and pitifully in love with this fic* I've been checking at least three times a day for an update. I was just telling my roommate how I was wondering if that had been the last chapter or not--and then BAM! a new chappie! I had almost lost faith. Ah....I shall never lose faith again! Can't wait for the next chapter--you are wonderful!