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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person -
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! take THAT oro-bastard!!! I HATE U U...YOU BIG JERK!!!! GRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol good good good job. I think I re-read every single sentence twice while reading it, so that I could soak up all the emotions. It was really very emotional. Ok, one criticism though...it didn't flow as your previous chapters did...but it was STILL...SO GOOD! YAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! lol Sasuke, u're still a jerk...but a lower jerk than Oro! *beats the crap out of Oro!* DIE! lol ^^ *laughs* Alright, good job :) i love you Naruto-nii-chan :D Keep it up ok! I'm glad u updated so fast :D you're such a good writer *cries* :)
person squeaker the stab monkey
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Words cannot describe how much I adore this fic. Sexy and hot, kinda sensual in the beginnnig and then nice and sweet and angsty and I luurve it!!
person Argento
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeak* I adored this chaper... *convulsedie*
person hogo-chan
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Squeals* that was amazing! I love you forever!
person bara-aoi
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* wow, i just finished reading chapter 30, first i was crying 'cuz of the hurt and now i'm just happy, My god your story is so wonderful, I love it. They're so cute I love how you portray them both, and your writing is amazing, so vibrant and detailed. I hope there are more chapters comming soon, I'm intrested to see what role Itachi is playing here (good/bad)

Please update soon

^__^ and thank you for the wonderful read!
person Hitomi
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 30)
*cries* You're such an amzing writer!! The ending was wonderful and oh-so-fitting. Bea-u-ti-ful.^^

MORE!!!!!
person caro8
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30


Wow.....oh god wow. The chapter started out making me think that maybe Sasuke would leave and there would be more angst. They way they said good bye to each other was amazing. Then with Itachi showing up and Naruto going to the train station......so romantic. Now all I have to wait for is Itachi's reasoning, Naruto's confession and hopefully no more Orochimaru. That guy is creepy.

But overall this was an awesome chapter, and I love this fic.
person Broken Raven
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you know, thinking about the end of this chapter is going to have me smiling like a idiot for no apparent reason for about a week or two.
::glomps you::
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does this mean Itachi is really a good guy? UPDATE SOON!
person clarechan
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg. could it be? YES!!!! Thank you for posting so quickly! I am so in love with this fic, it's ridiculous! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!! *world record glomp* What a great chapter! EEEEeeeeeee! *runs around half-crazed not knowing how to handles the frantic happiness* I knew Sasuke couldn't resist Naruto's mojo! Heh heh. Well, i'll say again--Thank you! And even though i check every day for a new chapter, i will understand if it's not posted as quickly as this one--though even if you posted it now, it would anxiously awaited!