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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Hyang
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! finally! (does a happy dance) i would have been sad if sasuke had to go to orochimaru again... please dont make this a dream!! please oh please!! *prays*
person momoko
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Random fan that has been stalking this fanfic ever since the very first chapter came out...and boy am I glad to have stayed with this fanfic!! *fangirl squeal* I LOVED this chapter to bits....I nearly cried while reading it! (I'm serious! *looks embarresed* ^^;;; ) And it's....it's Utada Hikaru's "Dareka no Negai ga Kanau Koro"!! *squeals some more* GODS, the way you tied in the lyrics....*melts* I've fallen in love with this fanfic all over again...*dies happily* *coughs* Anyway, keep up the good work you!! I shall forever worship you! *starts worshipping*
person oOKeairaOo
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm trying to think of something to say, but really, all I can come up with is THANK YOU.

You see, I found this story the other day while searching for Sasu/Naru-ness. My girlfriend has recently gotten me obsessed. I normally don't like AUs, but I decided to read this one, and it quickly became my new favorite story. Just the right thing for my Sasu/Naru fix. I read the entire thing in one day. I love the way you have developed all of the characters over time, Sasuke's especially, while still keeping them in character, which is a difficult thing to do, especially with an AU. Sasuke has been changed by being with Naruto, but not enough to turn him into a different character alltogether. Just enough to give all of your readers the warm fuzzies.

So I guess my initial thank you was both for putting such an excellent story up for all of us to read, and for not letting Sasuke get on that damned train! ^^; Really, your story was so great, but after getting to the last few chapters, I was so upset that I had to write my own little piece of Sasu/Naru angst just to stop thinking about it. But I feel the warm fuzzies again now, so all is right with the world. Thanks for the update, and I look forward to another one.
person lo
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the audience sighs in relief. Nice. NOw I look forward to see where else the story will go
person ravyn
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...i can just imagine naruto cracking up when he saw itachi get a ticket. That made me laugh. Good chapter by the way. There together again. YAY!!!. update soon i want to see what happens
person angel ran
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww..........that was so cute, and a little sad ^^ Well, it was a LOT sad before Sasuke decided he couldn't go through with it!! It was so bittersweet, reading about them being together again ^^ aww....and...teh hot sex, lol!! ;D Great job w/ that scene, hopefully that was when Sasuke realized what a stupid choice he made!! Well, who knows...^^ (well, you probably, lol) AND EEEEEEEEE the part when Sasuke tells Naruto that he loves him!!!!!!!!! OMG!....OMG!!!!!! Yeah, that was just the best O__O And, of course, teh sex, and also, when they were on the train platform ;__; Aww...but darn that Naruto, he should have repeated what he yelled when the train went by!! I bet Sasuke is dying to hear it ^_~ aw...that cutie... And so cute about Sasuke's toothbrush even, and how everything in Naruto's place is just the way it was when he left..;__; SO SAD. (and just thought, awww, Sasuke's toothbrush in the cup is like Sasuke's decision to stay! hmm..maybe i'm hallucinating)
But it's kinda sad that Sasuke's mom only showed him affection when he was about to leave in pursuit of being greater...even though i guess it's a step in the right direction. I wonder why her and Itachi had the sudden change of heart?? So confusing..^^
but now i'm SO EXCITED to see where this is gonna go from here!!...Okay, yeah, so I think that every chapter, i am just *always* wanting to know where this fic is going next ^___^ So, yeah, thanks for the uber-fast update! That rocked o.O
Can't wait can't wait! ^^ gl with teh next chappieeeeee *heart*
person MultifacetedTune
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!!!!! *does the happy dance* OMG, you rock!!! *sends you a truckload of chocolates and buys you a flower shop* Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^___^ It had a good ending!!! It's finally lighthearted again!!! ....not that I'm foolish enough to think that it won't turn angsty again in the next chapter, but still!!! And you updated quickly!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!! ^^;; Okay, I'll stop...........lol. ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne, and thanks once again!!!
person t3h_3vil
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually to lazy to review....
But you're a GODDESS.
You hear me? I mean...WOW....
When I reached the last chapter, it was chapter 27 back then... I felt the world slipping from under my feet...
Now when I saw that it was updated, my chest almost exploded! (the good, feely-poetic way... Not the blood and gore one...)

Thanks so much! Hanyaaaaaaaaaan!!! =^_^=
I really LOVE your fic!
I won't ask for a quick update coz I know how slippery and valuable time is...
But you know I want one. Badly...

Love
person Emina
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That whole 'blow an eyelash and make a wish' thing, I do that ^^

With eyelashes and those fluffy, floating seeds, they looks more like dandiloin seeds, but they're bigger.

This chapter was, as usual, amazing.

Emotions, details, characteraztion, you write them all nicely.

-Emina
person hogo-chan
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad! but the ending was cute! waisting an eyelash tee hee. great chapter! thank you for updating! and update faster next time! i miss this fic so much when your not posting fast enough!