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AAAAHHHHHH!!! i just love this story sooo much!!! It's so friggin' sweet and angsty!!!! It's absolutly beautiful!!!! can't wait to see how it all turns out!!!! BTW this was, i think, one of the first stories i ever read on this site!!! Keep up the excellent work!!
oh yeah, i loved the part with Jiraiya last time....that was cool.

Aw... this chapter came out great. I love how you portrayed Ran. Cute girl. :P

aww....;__;....now i can't be so mad at Sasuke either....=__= sigh.
*sniff*...=( that was really sad...aaar, you are so good at writing!! Cause i am definitely feeling as though i'm being pulled along on their emotional rollarcoaster and it leaves this sad feeling in the pit of my stomach X__X noooo sasuke-kuuun, don't do it!! O_O can't help but also have this terrible sense of forboding..gah...he'd better stay outta trouble at the new school! But, yeah, I like how Naruto is getting to be friends with Ran!! So sweet :') hee!! But definitely my favourite bittersweet part was when Naruto was realizing that Sasuke wanted to let go...i guess it's his life...;__; but..narutooo nooo!!
*goes off to sniffle over the new chapter*
Great new chappie though O__O...so sad...gaah...dunno what to think ;___;
*cries*
Hope things will somehow work out....? ^^ good luck on the next chapteeer! <3

hmm...so will you have itachi hire naruto or something? that would be interesting...or is too cliche?

(Ch. 29)
Hard chapter, I liked the ending's ironic undertone.

Hope your not coming to a close, just yet. I'm looking forward to a happy ending. And that WAS a threat. ^.~

Until la next,
Ja ne~

Woohoo yus! New chapter <3
I cant wait for your next chapter,
so happppyy ^____^
Rhichan <3

Okay, this is just straight art. ART DAMMIT! ART!
I love the way you write, although, I think you should blend some of yoursentences together to avoid your words sounding so detached from each other. Let ir flow~

Otherwise, I see no problems. You are a wonderful writer.

*sob* dazz so sweet *sob* please update soon.i really want to find out wat happened. hopefully, dis is one of those stories with a happy ending

Oh man. While i hate Naruto's cousin a little less than earlier, I still feel really bad for Naruto.

Also, that school isn't going to be that good for Sasuke. Orochimaru is bad news.

Update as soon as you can! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

;.; You ebil, ebil person.

Write moooooore. ;.;