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yay! u finally updated again!!! omgoddess! sasuke, no!!! waaah!! *sigh* okay, well i was actually expecting that, but ... noooo!!! and i totally agree w/naruto...the couple should totally get back together! ^___^ ah, but you gotta toss some angst into the mix, too of course.... and that part w/naruto saving and helping ran and her subsequent "compliment of thanks" to him was cute

JIRAIYA!! The pervert makes his first appearnance. Yay, I love him so so much! I'm so happy right now. But Orochimaru, ugh; I almost gaged at that scene. I want Naruto and Sasuke together forever! ^^ Thanks for another awesome chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow...umm...*hugs author* I LOVE YOUR STORY!
Really, it amazing! I love the way you've taken their 'darkness' from the anime and put a 'real world' spin on it all. And the way you've kept them so...Sasuke and Naruto. The way they interact is so fun to read I just...wow. Really.

Now on to the important stuff...UPDATE! *makes puppy eyes* Please?

*finally lets go of author* Oh, *blushes* Sorry...

WTF, where's the rest?! *cries* I'm so dead tired right now, i just spent 5 hours reading this fik and i've grown rather fond of it. They seem to be progressing along the lines that a /real/ relationship would and that's awesome.
*twitches* i really hope this story is updated soon.

gah @_@;; WHY DONT YOU UPDATE!?!? You need to update! *point* your so meannn ;____; waiiiih *glomps* you h-havee too!!!

I dont know who you are....but I love you o__o I...love this damn fic to shreads, and demand your update! ;_; This story made only be words..*that have been put up very good together!!!* but it has put alot of emotion into me! From, the tingling sensation in the tummy, to the stuffy nose and watery eyes! This has been the first AU fic i have read, and now I know they arent so bad! But maybe thats because you are a very skilled writer xDDD I do wish for you update as soon as possible...i mean like seriously. I cant wait, its unbearing and rhichan needs more... and more o_o ugh i cant believe it ended! Its horrible!!! your a horible person, yet an awsome person!!!! Leave on such a...a....horible place!! I dunno, just please please plllleeeeeasssseeeee updateeee ;________________; xo Shizuou xo

OH THIS IS SO SAD PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Yes, finally!! An update! I've been holding my breath like crazy to see what would happen after that incredible cliffhanger from the previous chapter. Great job of incorporating Shizune, Tsunade, and Orochimaru into the fic. I hope Jiraiya is going to make an appearance soon to complete the set. XD
Oh, and I love how Naruto finally gets back at Sasuke. Go Naruto!
Hmmm, now what could Orochimaru be plotting with Sasuke? Ah, the cliffhanger suspense!
Once again, awesome fic. Please update soon!

DAMN! How can you leave it like that?! I was just wondering when Orochimaru would come into the picture. OMG, I am SOOOO glad you updated though. My whole day was made (and I had a pretty shitty day). I like that you have included other couplings in here and that they are all really good together. Weee! *loves yaoi beyond reason* but your het is wonderful too. Continue soon please!!!! *begs*

Okay! Here's how it is...I love your story. I adore it. I'm addicted to it. I wait for you to update it. I love the suspense in it. I love the drama in it. I cannot believeeeeee that Sasuke is showing signs of working with Oro-jack-***. What's the pendant all about?!?! I am soooo curious! This fic is so amazingly written, with such truth in it that I can see it actually happening when you're writing (and lately, that hasn't been happening even with good books from great authors) that it's definitely my favorite fic out there. :P So nyah, you better update soon! You used to update so quickly, too! Get back to doing that!!! I hate Sasuke, so don't you daaaaare make MY NARUTO suffer even more than he already has - both in the anime and in your fic! HUMPH.