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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person the_true_silver
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how come take so long to update?

silver
person michirukoshi
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so beautifully written: I cannot emphasize this enough.
The world you have created is intriguing, but easily comprehensible due to the parallels to our own world.
It's amazing.
Truly breathtaking work.
I cannot wait for the next chapter! *.*
Keep up the fantastic writing! ^^
~michi~
person tsu
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I've been waiting for the update for weeks. Great job, but now I am thoroughly confused.... >_<
person Hitomi
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 26-27)
Yaooooza! Talk about angst!

MORE!^^


Ja ne~
person terribilita
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the new chapter. You never disappoint! This chapter left me feeling good (GO NARUTO!) and bad (ugh, Orochimaru!) and I love it all. Thanks so much, now it's on to wait for the next chapter. ^_^
person ROGUEFURY
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a awesome chapter. NEEEEEED MOOOOOOOREEEEE, NOW!!!!
person Emina
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
I'm never disappointed with your chapters, never...
though the wait is sometimes long, the quailty of the chapter overcomes that ^^

Drama... so much of it, I love it!

You really should give yourself a pat on the back for the way this story is coming along ^^

Amamzing work, as always.

-E.m.i.n.a
person Tsugath
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! I love this story. Wish I could just take a knife to Itachi though. Keep them coming please!
person jazzy
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, that was to damn good. And kinda scary Orochimaru and Itachi.

Reading this story is one hot ride can't wait for the next installment.
person Saki
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah...That's a very strong chapter on 26! But I like the affect where Naruto takes the initiative to actually give back the pendent to Sasuke though it seems like he was trying to break Sasu's "icy"act again which I hope he did. Though chapter25 still got me concerned about what happened to Naruto.^_^ I can't wait but hope to read the next chapter on what will Sasuke choose. And I hope for Naruto's sake that Sasuke will do the right thing for their relationship to grow stronger.