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found this on a fanfic recommendation site. this and the other story of yours listed on there were the only ones I would recommend myself. this was a little over the border of too much porn for my taste XD but that was fine, because it was added to not taking away from the excellent storyline. really liked it, thanks a lot.

This story actually inspiried me to become a fanfiction authour So I would love to let you know... I LOVE YOU!

Hey I LOVED your story and really hope that you write more!!!

I'll be looking outt for any new stories that you write!!!!!^^

omg awesomenreeeeeees oh yeah omps opmsawesome stopry

i used to read your fic a long time ago and followed every update religiously. i dunno why, but yesterday i was reminded of this fiction and i looked it up and have been reading it since then every time i got a chance. it's still absolutely beautiful. it still made me laugh and cry and make my stomach do weird ass summersaults. it's the best piece of fiction i've ever read, in all the fandoms i've ever been part of. that's probably not saying much considering i'm not big into lots of fandoms, just 3-4 XD but, that's pretty big for me, you know. I just wanted to say, that even though this fic is over, there are still people out there who are reading and enjoying this :) i certainly did. when i finished reading it now, i realized lots of things that i hadn't realized before. like when Naruto finally said i love you, you wrote that he had whispered it, spoken into a hand and had screamed it out loud. and i don't think i had gotten that reference when i first read it when u had updated it. but this time around, i totally got it. cause those moments had stayed with me in my reading u know, cause i was reading it in one go. anyway, just made it all the more better.

this review is super long, and i just can't stop praising it. the only other thing i can say is that you should update with a new story. i'd love to read something else for you. and if u don't have time for that, then maybe edit some of the chapters in the beginning of this story. AFFs formatting errors made the words a bit messed up in a few places (you'll see when you look at it, especially this funny error where in one chapter, the title said "Spiral Fag" instead of "Spiral Falling." That was just freakin hilarious).

Anyway good luck and good job :D loved it.

AIEEEEEEEEE!!!!! I loved your story, I saw the first part in a comic on dev-art and got sucked in. I'm not usually into yaoi, but the way you wrote it was HOT! Gah! I'm going to send your story to all my friends. Keep up the AWESOME work!

peace, love, and all of the above!
-Joanie A*K*A mitsukotheanimefreak (my dev. name)

this is the best yaoi story of sasunaru I have EVER READ!
I loved it so much,I've practically memorized it.(and i only read it once!)

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the BEST naruto fanfiction that I have ever read in my entire life of naruto fanfiction reading!!!!!!!!!!!
That was so sweet/sad.

And I thank you far putting Sasuke and Naruto back together

and........ the lemons were HOT!!! Please write more...for me? =3

I read this whole story before but it seems like typos keep popping up. You should really re-edit this.

This is good. I usually have very little patience for AU's, but damn... Gorgeous character development.

And the ending was a nice touch. Really brings the whole fic together. ^-^