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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuck yeah you don't give up that easily. And what's with Itachi, first he seems like he wants Naruto away from Sasuke, but he seemed pleased when Naruto said he was going to fight. And if they hadn't had the conversation Naruto wouldn't have been prompted to go bakc after Sasuke. Maybe he wants to bring his brother down? Meh, and it did seem for a moment like things might have been getting better with Sasuke and his mom, too bad. Love your story, please update it again soon!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it I, really, really like that chapter. Especially Naruto's reaction to the whole disaster of the the last chappy. I must say yoou wrote the exact opposite of I expected. It shows you have a great talent if you to surpize the reader like that. So that only leaves me with the question what will you make Sasuke do? (concerning both developments you broght up, that is).
I truely think your next chapter will be just as exciting and worth the wait as all the others have been before it.
I truely think your next chapter will be just as exciting and worth the wait as all the others have been before it.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story... It breaks my heart to see Naruto suffer like this...
Love the little twist at the end! I suppose that now is Naruto's turn to hunt Sasuke...
Well, congratulations! You made me stay till 7 in the morning to finish the reading! My eyes were teary because of the exaustion...
I'm waiting, drooling with the idea of getting another chapter! Please do your best!
And since I'm in a mood for pleading, please kill Itachi and Orochimaru in the most painfull way!
Love and kisses:
Rubisco
Love the little twist at the end! I suppose that now is Naruto's turn to hunt Sasuke...
Well, congratulations! You made me stay till 7 in the morning to finish the reading! My eyes were teary because of the exaustion...
I'm waiting, drooling with the idea of getting another chapter! Please do your best!
And since I'm in a mood for pleading, please kill Itachi and Orochimaru in the most painfull way!
Love and kisses:
Rubisco
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love ;p keep up the good wok
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what you should do? You should have a scene with Naruto saving his cousin from thugs!! You already set it up when he stated he's protective over his cousin and I want more family interactions!!! UPDATE SOON!!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah! i love you for this chapter! thank you so much for updating! you dont know how happy the end of this chapter has made me!!! *flips out* i love this chapter so fscking much!!!! yay! please update fast!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm very happy that Naruto decided that he wasn't going to give up on Sasuke. I just can't picture him ever really quitting.
I was also very happy with the appearance of Tsunade and Shizune. Now that Orochimaru made an appearance, is it possible to hope for Jiraiya to enter the scene?
On a minor note about Naruto's bitch of a cousin, the poor guy is too nice for his own good. She deserves anything that happens to her.
I'm looking forward to learning more about Sasuke's actions in the past few chapters and some interaction with Itachi as well.
Update soon!
I was also very happy with the appearance of Tsunade and Shizune. Now that Orochimaru made an appearance, is it possible to hope for Jiraiya to enter the scene?
On a minor note about Naruto's bitch of a cousin, the poor guy is too nice for his own good. She deserves anything that happens to her.
I'm looking forward to learning more about Sasuke's actions in the past few chapters and some interaction with Itachi as well.
Update soon!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn, wat the heck is wrong with Sasuke? and gawd not the snakey bastard Orochimaru. wat kind of sick plan is he talking abt to Sasuke? argh! update soon.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"...and lasting until nine in the evening, which game him plenty of time to do his homework once he came home."
-> gave
-> gave
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! And it was a "good" ending this time!!! ^___^ *gives you chocolates* Now then: go write more, and keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!