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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person dAni3Lr
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waiting for this chapter has left me coming back to this site everyday. i hope sasuke knows wad he's doing.. it's very brave of naruto to go back n gave him the pendant. hope naruto feels better, and sasuke quickly realise what he needs in his life. more on sasuke's point of view pls... ^^
person lo
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You just keep getting better!!! There has been no lull in the stroy at all. This is very well written, I just can't get over how good it is. I can't wait for the next chapter, I love it.
person ladygizarme
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yayzies! you finally updated!!! i'm soooo happy!! i loved the chapter and i hope it doesn't take too long for you to update again!! yours is my in my top 3 fav narufics right now!!! if not #1!! please update soon!!
person Chisama
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FIGHT, NARUTO! FIIIIIGGGHHHHT FOR WHAT YOU WANT!!!

This story gets more amazing with each chapter. ^_^
person bhodi li
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! i came in late reading your story but you are fantastic! I am glad that Naruto is not giving up but I am filled with foreboding that Orochimaru is in here. *sigh* I hope you continue with this fantastic story!
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
huhray for naru-chan! now all he have to do is sock it to sasuke and they will be happy again!
person ROGUEFURY
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT!!! I hope you review soon. That was just too cruel of you
person terribilita
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, either update or shoot me!
person Harmony
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D WOW! I really * LOVE * this fanfic. It's one of the best I've read in a long time.

Update soon~ I can't wait to see what's in store for our little Naruto. :3


Just a fan; Harmony.
person clare-chan
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COME ON, COME ON ALREADY! You've had us locked in this tense moment for what seems like forever! Please! I'm begging you! Continue! *cries in agony*

*clears throat* But it's not all dramatics. I re-read this chapter because it was so good and now I love it even more. I love the last line of this chapter as well as the "something too timid to yell" bit. You have a way with words--so you definitely should continue and update soon!