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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Kurayami
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really happy that someone from lj recommended this fic of yours. I absolutely love it! It had me in a trance and I couldn't tear my gaze from the monitor. I just had to read it until the very end. Amazing how you get to invoke emotions from your readers. The smut was hot and yet you manage to keep the plot in place.

I hope you get to finish this beautiful fic. Gambarimasu. And yes, you have lots of my love and adoration <3333
person Jei
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jeezbus, I spent the last two days reading this fic. I love it, but I have to say...can't Sasuke just love Naruto and...you know, not be mean? *shrugs* But the angst is well done, and adds plot instead of taking from it. I must say, I hate Ran and Reiko, and have a newfound respect for Ino and Sakura. I just hope Sakura slaps the shit out of Sasuke for hurting Naruto, because I think with the wonderful way you characterize them she and Ino would do that rather than persue him (the bastard). So, yes...great job, and please-oh-please update soon?
person wodka
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man is this sad...please dont make them break up...or at least chage it into Itachi/Naruto, nice Itachi would also be nice...but the most important thing right now, update...mean to stop at such a place...-_-...*grrrrr*....want to read on....
person azamaria-chan
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! waaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!! no sasuke no!!! what are you doing?! :| *sniff sniff* awww... naruto's all alone... usually i don't really like au fics but i saw the recommendation and got tempted to read this. it's really good. even with the sex and good stuff, there's still storyline and plot. :D hope you keep on writing, this is a great fic! happy new year!
person narlover
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u haven't updated for a really long time and i love ur story so plz update soon
person michirukoshi
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful..I've never really been able to enjoy an AU..and now, I'm obsessed!
I love your writing style..it flows so gorgeously, and with a wonderfully colorful vocabulary!! I have never read such good writing (especially yaoi).
An amazing tale you have woven..filled with intricacies: an enigma of emotions.
I love it.
I cannot wait for the next chapter! ^^
Keep up the fantastic work!
~michi~
person ladygizarme
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! i love this story! it's so awesome and one of my new favs!! your description is perfection and i eat it up!!! and, although he doesn't realize it, my hubby greatly appreciates it as well *smirks* okay... moving on from the raving praise.... to my raving rant... dooooooooooooood!!!! wtf mate!! why is sasuke leaving naruto, how is that gonna solve anything at home? i was expecting that as soon as he "knew what he had to do" or whatever... but DAMN!! cruelness!! to deny him in front of EVERYBODY!! and what's the whole deal w/the pendant?? i hope you'll get into that in the next update.... what's the whole significance behind it, why'd sas take it, how'd naruto initially react to him wearing it, why didn't he ever get it back once they were together, why'd sas throw it back now? is that his way of making sure he severs all ties or somethin? what's the deal w/itachi?? what's the deal w/ran?? please don't torture us in suspense of all this angst!! update soon!! sooner than soon!! and often!! **patiently* awaits next update**
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happens next? So many things are up in the air, and I am hooked to a big cliffie. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
person kenshinjunkie03
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
warning: this is a flame not suitable for those who love sasuke....

that bastard. how dare he do that to poor ol' naru-chan. i swear i would give a piece of my mind right now. i can't believe after all that he did to naruto like sexally harrass him and stuff, he just goes and deny all of that. that is too low. i can't believe that bastard.

p.s. i love the story, update soon please?
person tsu
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! Sasuke is being a bastard again! *whiny childish voice* Make him stop! >_< You know what? Only one thing can solve this... REVENGE! Payback's a bitch!