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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Nicola
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Give me a sec, while I remember how to -breathe-.

When I first looked at this story, I sighed, exasperated, expecting another silly little romance. This was... this was some of the most goddamn powerful writing I've read in -any- fandom.

To say I am impressed would be kinda like saying that hippos are slightly plump. I think I'll die if you don't update this. The fangirl in me, the one that only gets out once every million fanfics is having a total field day. "OMG, LEIK, THIS IS SOOOOO GREAT! I AM SOOOOO IN LOVE! RAH, RAH, RAH!"

I don't know what else to say, because I'm speechless. To a certain extent. x.x

I TOTALLY salute you, as wierd as it sounds. Feh. Like that'll ever bother me.

N.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. Evil. Evil, I tell you, eeeeeeevvvvvviiiiiillllllll!!! How could you do this to me?!?! Do you have any idea how much I cried during the last coupla' chapters??? Look!!! *waves an empty box of tissues in front of your face* See??? See?!?! *breaks down and goes into a corner to sob uncontrollably, leaving her muse, Melody, to finish the review* Mel: ^^;; ...uummmm.....yeah......uhh...she really does love your story. It's very creative and well written...she just...well... ^^;; I don't suppose that you could update anytime soon, could you? We would both greatly appreciate it, for two reasons: 1) We want to find out what happens, and 2) We have two reports due at the end of the week, and she is utterly useless when she's like this...soooooo...ummmm....keep up the good work, and update ASAP, kk? *wanders over to console the sobbing mess in the corner who has gone through yet another tissue box* ^^;;
person Silver
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sigh... i'm so saddened by this chapter.. when sasuke throws the pendent back to naruto.....PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!! this is an amazing story

Silver
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dammit sasuke. why does he have to be such an asshole?! argh, poor naruto...my heart hurts for you.
person izumi
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uhh.. u made me cry...
person clarevoyant
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damndamndamndamndamndamn you! GOD! SASUKE IS SUCH A F**KING JERK!!!! *is really hyped up* ooooohhhh...i just wanna kick his ass. *tries to calm down enough to not just fling insults and threats at sasuke* wonderful characterization of sasuke, since we know just how capable he is of denying everything and walking away. i am curious about this pendant though. not much has been revealed as to why it is so significant. please update soon! that was a really good cliff-hanger! ja ne!
person dAni3Lr
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my God i could wait forever for your next update man... and this chapter upsets me very much *sobz* why sasuke?? Didn't he nid Naruto so much? What the hell is he thinking when he just sweep him off like that in front of the class?? Gods this has better be a good explanation from Sasuke if not i cannot slp at nite *urgh* Great chapter Becca~~ please please update soon :( Merry Christmas btw :)
person KyuTails
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was about to scream because of that terrible cliffy, but, I'm too pissy right now.

I WOULD call Sasuke a bastard, but, with all things considered (Itachi and all that jazz) I can and cannot understand him. Sasuke IS difficult to get, isnt he?
U_U...but, please update quickly. I check back here nearly everyday to see if you've updated.

person Hitomi_No_Ryu
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SASUKE YOU BASTARD!!! Give us a reason why!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
person Popcorn Oracle
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're evil >_> really evil. ; ; damn, how could you write a chapter like that. Gahhh. Sasuke is being such a bastard, god. What is it with kids like him and not ever wanting to talk it out ><.
Yeah, you're writing has really improved, its very well written.
But evillllllllllll
Good chapter. But make it all un-sad ._.