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OH MY GOD!!! you did it..............you actually did it...........how the fuck could you do it?!!!!! SASUKE!!! YOU BASTARD!!! *wipes away the tears from her eyes* that was fucking harsh! I saw this coming but the fact that it actually happened.......... poor naruto. That assshole better be suffering as well. Damn that bitch, Ran!!! *takes out a gun and shoots Ran multiple times and Sasuke once, for hurting Naruto* God, I LOVE this story. I know you cant have love without some pain but ssssshhhhhhiiiittttt!! that was supremely fucked up!! You WILL UPDATE SOON or else i shall be forced to strap you to your computer and make you read SasuSaku stories until you puke. *shakes her head in refusal to the chapter that she just read* i still cant believe it........... ;_;

Devious Lil Devil

......WAIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU JUST LEFT US HANGING LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!

Reading 'Spiral Falling' is like falling in love and breaking up at the same time...I get so anxious about each chapter that you write, and then cliffhangers like this stab at my heart. You have such incredible talent as a writer!

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG! STUPID SASUKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO! T___T PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! THIS IS SOOOOO GOOOOD!

The story that I have read so far as I could say it's very amazing and it really has a big impact when you wrote about Sasuke and Naruto. There was also a very strong feeling that you can tell when reading the Chapters so far and also it seems like on Chapter 24, there was a strong sense that even though their relationship that was strong at the beginning, the way Sasuke told Naruto off feels like Naruto is slipping down towards feeling as if he would want to commit suicide.But even though, it also seems like Naruto did want to confess to Sasuke that he did love him since he never said it,except ever since Itachi came back,Sasuke started putting up a barrier which just seems to block out Naruto. Though he did really love Naruto but now, in my opinion about it, it seems that part where Sasuke left without picking up Naruto's pendent and only that time Naruto got it back... I felt that Naruto isn't going to take much longer and might commit suicide any minuet. Gomen na sai. This is just my opinion and how I felt about the story that has a really big impact when I read it. I'm actually looking forward to more chapters and what will happen in the end. Hopefully that Naruto and Sasuke will love again one day or even be together to make their love even stronger for one another...ne?

What an awesome addition to an already great story. Poor Naruto; I can't wait for the next chapter!

OMG SASUKE YOU STTTTTUUPID IDIOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!! YOU HAVVVVVVVVE TO UPDATE IVE BEEN WAITING FOREVER FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER TO COME OUT! THINGS BETTER TURN OUT ALRIGHT! MAAAN I LOOOVE THIS STORY!!

So very harsh, all the cold neglect after the smoking hot pursuit.please write more soon.
chris

this story better NOT turn TRAGIC!!!! YOU ARE E~V~I~L AT LEAVING THE STORY LIKE THAT! YOU *MUST* updateeeeeee!!!! Sasuke is a fucking bastard and Ran should die and rot in HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAAAAAAAAN UPDATE!

Wow. That was heavy. Now I will be on edge until the next chapter. Good job though this story just keeps getting better. I can't wait for the next chapter, but do not ruch yourself on account of others. a rushed story is never a good one. You have done very well. And I just want to tell you that you ROCK!!

lo

the only thing I can say is 'ouch'. I can only imagine how painful that is.

Hopefully Sasuke is not too wrapped up in self-pity to notice he's pushing him over the edge.