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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person NarutoDemon
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved it....sasuke chasing naruto. Keep writing ...update soon!
person Shez
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is....
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MY POOR NARUTO~!
person SpiritFighter
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* you didn't!!! *tears well up in eyes* you did.... oh no!! Poor Naruto-kun!! I almost started crying again! DAMN YOU RAN!!! *sobs quietly in the corner* Well, there is no story without some pain, but oh how it hurts. You must, must, must update soon!!!
person animegirl
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY GOD, how could you do that, how the fuck could you do that to naruto. i really liked this story but now you've gone and done some shit like this! you'd better bloody well up date and get them back together or i swear i'll hunt you done and make you do it!
person ghostninja85
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was an intense chapter. I should have seen this coming, but I didn't. Please update soon. I really want to know what happens next
person WaterBookLover
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You made me cry! How could you do this to poor Naru-chan? Evil Sasuke! Go die! (directed at Sasuke, not you!)
person Broken Raven
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Darn you, you made me cry! ;_;
person Michrure
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jaw on the floor* That....hurt. Sasuke...how could he do that to Naruto. I'm...totally freaked out right now. How could that happen? Just like that...I really don't know how to think. This was just so...powerful. Great work. I'm waiting to see how this is going to be resolved. Merry xmas.
person kenshinjunkie03
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you must update. damn, i love your story. why did sasuke do that? why didn't naruto cry? why are you doing this to naruto? evil person makes good story from begining to end.
person ravyn
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow....that was harsh. Poor naru chan. you have to update soon because i need to know what happens now.
luv
ravyn