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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person caro8
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**Chapter 26**

NOOOO!!!! What the hell is going on?!?!? I feel so bad for Naruto, but I know Sasuke has to be going through some kind of pain.....right?? God this is good.

Oh and and on a side note....this was the un-beta version...WOW!! My stories are shit until my beta reads through it.
person Ezj
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh so good, oh so good, oh so good... not the breakup
but the story... more more more... now it's beginning
to get more and more tangled... more ^-^
person HentaiK
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__^;
Everytime I read your story I find myself loving it more and more, and presumably, I'm starting to quote lines from it at school. ^^;; It's in the ranking position No.2 of my top 10, and I like so very, very much. ^_^ Keep up the good work, okay? You're very talented with your words.
person ghostninja85
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I missed this last update the first time around some how. I only just read it.

Sasuke's brother is alive and an asshole huh? Interesting.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I want to find out what Sasuke's decision is. Update soon!
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg. Itachi finally entered the big picture. and poor Sasuke, i hope he does cope well with help of Naruto this time round. anyway, update.
person Baka_Tsu
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off, I gotta say you are one hell of a writer. Ive been reading your story for about a month now, and Im in love with it ^^ *bows* I hope ya can update soon! I'm dying to find out Naruto's reaction to Sasuke's departure <<
person Rei Furuzowa
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I refuse to sound like a desperate fangirl begging you to update....

After almost losing hope in the naruto fandom, i stumble upon this. I must admit that at first I wasn't interested in reading it (mainly because it was AU and i wanted to read some hot ninja-luvin'), but after I started, I was very impressed. *sighs happily* Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is perfect in this, I love the way how even though this was an AU, you made both characters totally believable...and of course mixed in with teh hott sexx. I'd like see what Naruto's cousin and Itachi's role is in the future of this fic so..*takes a deep breath*

..PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE!

alright i couldn't help myself. XD

P.S: Your name sounds really familiar...have you written for any other fandom other than Naruto?
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*tackles* omg!! i love it!! write more dammit!!!!!! seriously... i really really adore this fic.... and Sasuke is going to get in trouble if he's wearing Naruto's shirt... isn't he?! i had forgotten about Naruto's cousin until you said it was HER!! silly me! can't wait for more!!!!
person Crizzy
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg please please please continue!
person popcorn oracle
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Argg! Nooo it's getting angsty again! And it was going so well for them too ; ;. Darn it, Sasuke had better learn that pushing Naruto away isn't the way to deal with this -_- it's just really annoying.
::sulk:: Well, anyhow, as usual, awesome chapter, nice descriptions, and an interesting plot ^.~.
Keep it up ^^