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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Kin Uchiha
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww...poor Sasuke-kun...being ignored again. *sigh* he must hurt so much to be shoved aside for his brother. his overly hot and sexy and psycho brother x3;;; and Itachi seems quite...polite and conceited. it's gross. and ahh!!! i hate Naruto's cousin! slap that evil girl, Sasuke-kun!! SLAP HER!! *cough* i love your story! update soon =)
person roriko
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You finally updated TTATT I've been waiting for this chapter for the past month ._.' It's the first fic I've ever checked for updates daily... please write more! ;___;
person clarechan
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Damn you! Every time. 'Course, you wouldn't be such a good author if you didn't leave us wanting more, ne? I have to admit there was a moment of squick in this chapter. I know it's childish and really germ-phobic, but when Naruto kisses Sasuke after sucking on Sasuke is really gross. *squick with squick face* I still love your work though!
person dAni3Lr
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
waited quite long for an update of this chapter, but where did Itachi pop out froM? Gosh.. and dat cousin of Naruto seemed really dangerous :( pls update soon thanks! :)
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Devious Lil Devil: O_o

Sorry I'm a little too dazed from the events of this chapter to review properly due to the appearance of Itachi and Sasuke's stupidity, so please update soon! *goes back and reads the chapter again*

Devious Lil Devil: Itachi.......:drool:.........Sasuke........:frowns:........that ass..........but Itachi.........:drools some more:.........and the lemon........seme Naruto.........*passes out from nosebleed*

Devious Lil Devil: @_@
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I knew Itachi will come in the story! Anyway I really like this chapter, it's good and lemony! :river of tears: Now I feel sorry for both Sasuke and Naruto! But that's what makes stories like this better! I wonder what will ahppen when Naruto meets Itachi again....ooooooh! I can't wait 'til the next chapter!
person lo
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. I love you characterization (you really make them almost your own) I love you word choice. The story is moving alone wonderfuly. Keep up the good work.
person Hitomi
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 25)

Well that was beautifuly angst-filled.
I'm dying to know what's next!
What will Itachi do? What was Sasuke's desicion?

Please, I'm seriously beging; I know you have school/work/whatnot but please try and update at least once every couple of weeks.
For your constent readers, at least.


Hope you get around to updating soon,
Sincerly,
Hitomi.

Ja ne~
person Blaise
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah stupid Sasuke, I hope now he won't be an idiot just when he and Naruto found happiness.
By the way another great chapter, it is always great to see this story updated
person SpiritFighter
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*GASP* An update?!?!?!?!? OMFG!!! YESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! *dies of happiness* Aww.... Such a depressing chapter! Damn Itachi.... Oh, well. I really hopw things don't go TOO bad with Naruto and Sasuke. Not that I would mind TOO much, cause I'm an angst queen. Anyways, why did you take so long? I was scared that you had forgotten about it!! Anyways, Thank you so much for updating!! Neeways, update soon?