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What an evil bitch his cousing is! Grrr... This chapter was great--as usual! For a while, I couldn't get on the site because it gave me error 403: forbidden. ??? Oh well, at least I got my Sasu/Naru fix. Thanks and can't wait for the next chapter!

Once again you have written a great chapter. Your writing just flows so nicely. I think you are so good, I am always looking out for anything you have written. Keep up the good work.

lo

So, we finally get to see the evil family. This was an interesting development, but I'm still interested in Naruto's necklace. I hope that that will be resolved in the future. Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

and here i thought they'll live happily ever after.. but it's okat i guess, new plot = longer fics.. YAYY!!

*does the author worship dance*
yay! new chapter!~~~ *glomps*

naruto's cousin, eh? =/ i don't like her..she's mean..

and oh..i had such a good laugh when naruto kicked her out of his room by taking off his shirt..
i would have just stayed and watched and drooled *_* mwhahahahahha...

i thought the last few scenes where ran and her friends were talking and giggling about naruto and cute guys in general was so...real..lol...that was really kewl..how ran's friends thought naruto was hot (cause he is..) while we know that ran hates naruto from the bottom of her shoe

is the last scene a flashback of when naruto used to live with his aunt?

thank you very much for writing!
*hugs*

kayoko

*bazookas Ran* DIE BIOTCH! How dare she sneer at our beautiful Naru-chan?!? Aw... more Sasuke possessiveness and a LEMON SCENE!!! *throws her mangy ass at BeccaAmon's feet* I LOVE YOU!!! I really like how this is going so far! Hmn, but what is going to happen next? Does Naruto have more stalkers?! Update soon? Please? I beg of you.... *kisses toes, then sucks on them* yummah. toes....

I remember reading this fic the first time and being somewhat annoyed ^^;. Because they weren't really rivals, it was just kind of, well, Sasuke sexually harassing Naruto many many times. God knows why I got so darned addicted to it! Maybe because it's so well done, and maybe because of how you justified it later. And maybe because I like this bit of plotlessness ^.~. But anyhow, yeah, good stuff ^^.

Ahh, this Sasuke is so sadistic O_O. But he's interesting that way. Although the first time I read it I couldn't help but keep imagining him as some scary muscle-y kid, you know? Meh, but come on, this is pretty pretty Sasuke ^^. But yeah, the development of the relationship deepens every chapter, yaay. I did skip over a few parts the first time, now I'm going all the way through and I really really like it.

^^; Ahh, theres that racey chapter I recall. Poor Naruto, Sasuke practically rapes him <_<. Thank god he never went that far though! Hurray! But yeah, the changing dynamics between them is lovely. The diolouge is always interesting, and although a little different from the show cannon, I think that they are both pretty in character ^^.

@_@ And the plot thickens! Hmm, I wonder what happened to Sasuke to leave those days. Oh, and Sasuke's confused, obviously infatuated comments to Naruto are just too darned cute ^^. I really love that scene with him walking in from the snow. Very very nice stuff...
::laughs:: wow, Sasuke has a dirty mind, no?