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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Hitomi
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 22)
Itachi, ne?
I like where you're leading this new line; first about Naruto, now about Sasuke.
Me like.

One question; what about Neiji? I just don't remember you ever brining him up.

Anyways, this has to be one of my most favorite Naruto fanfictions out there! Yup! Yup!
So, how about regulated updates, ne? ^^



Ja ne~
person rena
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work! and please have more narusasu ^^
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So it soon gonna be Sasuke's turn to tell his past. I knew this fic was missing something. UPDATE SOON!!
person izumi
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oohhhh... is that itachi????
person Too lazy to log in
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O

Oh no...I know who it is...

*hold head and yells about horrible things concerning Itachi*

IT'S ITACHI ISNT IT!??!?!

OOHHH ITA-CHAAANNN!!!

Itachi: Dont call me that...

Me: O_O AIIIEEEE!!!!! *runs at the speed of sound*

person Taylor
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AIIIEE!!! UPDATE! PLEASE!
person umber
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank goodness for crazy fangirls! I'm so glad Sakura found out - it was getting so peaceful that I was starting to get nervous. Your style still makes it ever so pretty no matter how much they hurt each other. In fact, I think it may get prettier relative to the level of tension and That. is just delectable.
person Miss Sonnetti
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^.^ Omiiigosh! This is such a CUTE and SEXY story!

** Waits patiently for the next chapter. ** ^_______^
person Crizzy
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON~~
person SexySiriusBlack
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well...that's pretty much how I thought everything would turn out. Except I was picturing this whole 'Sakura telling the entire school and then everyone turning against them' thing. And what's up with Kiba and Shikamaru...was it them that Naruto and Sasuke suspected were together? I know it was Kiba and someone else...what about them? Are we going to hear about them anytime soon? I hope so. Maybe they will follow Naruto and Sasuke's example...and get their thing out in the open...well...Naru and Sassy didn't exactly plan or want their relationship out in open...but...maybe it will give others courage. Anyway...I love this story and I love you! I hope you update soon...as I am leaving the US to go to a region of the world where there is NO technology. And I will be residing there for TWO years. So...I doubt I will be able to finish this story. Oh...I'm leaving Oct. 12...definitely not finishing this story...Oh well...it was nice while it lasted.