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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Miss KuroiTenshi
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:] I adore this fic. One of my favorites.

You're a very talented writer. <3
person eta.carinae
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
muahaha love the lube bit! who's the uke????
person kayoko
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my...*dances around*
so sweet >_
wahhhhhhhh.........i think the little grocery shopping scene at the end was great..i mean..it's very realistic. ^_^

i almost wanted naruto to use the lube..lol..*shakes head*

he'll use it later, right?

love the story, really made my day better...thanks for writing *hugs*
person MeLaiya
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man I love this, you are a very very talented author. Please keep the good work and update soon.
person evvy
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD I'm glad you updated so fast! Awhile ago I waited forever! But this was nice ^ I^ I love your characterization, keep it up! Can't wait for more.
person Blaise
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you and your many updates

Now that I said that I really like how we the story went into Sasuke's POV for that bit, we now know what he is thinking. Yay
I adore the away you express their emotions to each other, you make it seems so real and raw. Compared to the numerous other SasuNaru out there you have managed to make your story unique and real.
(actually giving them reasons to jumping each other bones, though sometimes with them you don't really need a reason ;) ) A

All your sex scenes are amazing, I was drooling over you many chapters of action
I can't wait to see your other plot developments :) And good luck
person Tsukineko9
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wai!!! Another chapter!!! ^________^ More soon, ne ne ne ne ne????
person asds
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Drooolssss.............................. *_*
person ayonoi
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*HUGS* you just made my day, I feel like the grin is going to split my face. Naruto is so funny, he really is. I guess a big step will be taken. Thank you for taking your time to get to this point.
person midori
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i would just like to say that this is one of the best fanfiction i've ever read. Really great story ^_^