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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
T_T...dude..I've never even seen this anime and I love this fic. Its awesome. That last part..just..it was a tear-jerker! T_T So..sad..Please update. You're an awesoriteriter, with a wicked writing style. Continue! I shall be checking this story~
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your new chapters are absolutely awesome. I adore the way you showed Naruto's past, and how his aunt has affected his judgment so very much. And I'm SO HAPPY that they have finally started calling each other by their given names. I've been waiting throughout the whole fic for that! Well, that and them finally going all the way, but that's besides the point. I hope you update as quickly as you just did! It would make Omen-chan very, very, amazingly, indescribably happy.
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU....are amazing.....I adore this story so so so much......thank you for writing it! The latest chapters are so great...I love how you're slowly allowing them to discover each other....they are still boys and not too swift in the emotions department. Great job! And the lemon was wonderful, too! Hmm, AND Im hearting over the fact they haven't had 'tailsex' yet XD Its sweet and endearing .....please take your time and never feel rushed by the likes of us. :D
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey BeccaAmon,
I have been reading this story since the first chapter came out and I've been loving it! I obl obligated to let you know what I think about Spiral Falling and hopefully to encourage you. ^_^ Spiral falling has everything that I look for in a fanfiction (or any story): great plot, great characterization, good grammar, and not to mention the awesome sex! (We all know thats the #1 reason to be on AFF ^_~) Anyways, I check this fic everyday looking for updates and imagine my surprise when I saw the latest addition. I squealed at the four new chapters :) I couldn't resist reading them all right then and there. *SO* good! You're very good with the sex scenes and that is surprising considering you said that Spiral Falling is the first NC-17 fanfiction that you have written. I hope that you keep writing! I love the premise of Spiral Falling -- it does something for me that no other fanfiction I've read has done and although I caquitquite put my finger on it, I think it has something to do with Sasuke molesting Naruto into submitting to feelings he had all along -- and its getting better and better. The love that you have setup between them is just so *perfect*. I can't get enough.
I don't know what I liked better, Naruto sucking Sasuke off while rubbing his prostate or Naruto waking up with Sasuke's erection hard against his. *nosebleed*
Well, I will stop my ranting now :P
Alwayite,ite,
Just Another Anime Freak ~ JAAF
I have been reading this story since the first chapter came out and I've been loving it! I obl obligated to let you know what I think about Spiral Falling and hopefully to encourage you. ^_^ Spiral falling has everything that I look for in a fanfiction (or any story): great plot, great characterization, good grammar, and not to mention the awesome sex! (We all know thats the #1 reason to be on AFF ^_~) Anyways, I check this fic everyday looking for updates and imagine my surprise when I saw the latest addition. I squealed at the four new chapters :) I couldn't resist reading them all right then and there. *SO* good! You're very good with the sex scenes and that is surprising considering you said that Spiral Falling is the first NC-17 fanfiction that you have written. I hope that you keep writing! I love the premise of Spiral Falling -- it does something for me that no other fanfiction I've read has done and although I caquitquite put my finger on it, I think it has something to do with Sasuke molesting Naruto into submitting to feelings he had all along -- and its getting better and better. The love that you have setup between them is just so *perfect*. I can't get enough.
I don't know what I liked better, Naruto sucking Sasuke off while rubbing his prostate or Naruto waking up with Sasuke's erection hard against his. *nosebleed*
Well, I will stop my ranting now :P
Alwayite,ite,
Just Another Anime Freak ~ JAAF
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your writiing has improved a helluva lot! When I first read this, I thought it was very mediocre, but, it's turned out to be tasteful. Keep it up! ^_^
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor naruto... and stupid adult putting blame on the shoulder of 8 years old kid. what about that necklace or something that sasuke took from naruto? what's the story behind it?
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the best AU SasuNaru fic I've ever read. Unlike ANY other SasuNaru fics, Naruto and Sasuke are really taking thier time. Each sexual encounter the two do something just a little bit more then what they did before, taking everything step by step. It's downright unheard of in the Naruto NC-17 universe!u'reu're amazing!! UPDATE SOON!!
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter made me weep, a lot. Sad but beautifully written. I really can't wait to see more. This fic just keeps getting better and better.
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You write such glorious angst and wrap it all in lemons. Nice job.
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! You know i was so caught up with reading this fic that I didn't realize that i was all ready late for sl...l.... Anywayz, I like the stories here more than in fanfiction.net. not because there's sex in here.... But, because the stories here are far more emotional...angsty, if you want to put it that way... Anywayz, keep up the good work!!!(^_^)