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Not all girl's heart are 'fragile' just Haruno's. She lives for breaking her own heart by stalking ppl who will clearly never be hers. >.< I don't like her.

So good! This story is going to be hard for the other authors I read to top! And I really don't know what else to say other than Its GREAT!

Inus_Kagome_Forever

P.S. I'm soooo glad Sasuke didn't leave. I almost thought the fic was gonna be an angsty one, lol

::sigh:: I just got done with chapter 18, Afterimage. ::sighs again:: cute, adorably cute, specially on Naruto's part, god of love him, and great! I think this is a good part to stop on. I'm a bit worried about the next chaps, A Girl's Heart is... I think thats what they're called. Oh I can't wait to read more. Hopefully soon I'll have time.

Inus_Kagome_Forever

This story is so adorably cute I didn't want to stop, but damn! Why do I have to sleep? lol. If only... yes I could manage somehow ::doubtful:: I think I'm on chap 11, so hopefully I'll read chap 12 soon! I don't know how you can write such an amazing story. The detail and feelings conveyed through this work is remarkable. Also the fact that you made a 32 or something chapter story where as if I had started off with the same first chapt as you mine would probably quickly end in a lemon. I'm horrible with this kind of thing, even though I love it. That's why am sooo glad to be reading yours, and its complete no less! You seem to be a very nice author, considering you don't seem to leave any cliffies, as of yet. :D I can't wait to read more!

Inus_Kagome_Forever

I'm not going to be kind, I'm going to be honest. This has to be the absolute BEST SasuNaru fanfiction, I have ever read! Doujinshi's MUST be made! *If only I had a scanner and your permission* The unbeta'd parts threw me off somewhat because some words would jumble up and I couldn't understand, but in the end, this has EXCEPTIONAL grammar, spelling, and AMAZING flow to the story!
I will continue to save the link to this fic in my E-mail so that I may read it again and again, to be honest, I've read this fic THREE TIMES, and it still never gets old.

EXCEPTIONAL JOB!

*claps*

-Kunoichi

::sigh:: I'm at a loss for words. This is great. I'm only on chapter five though, lol. I just wanted to tell you how great it is so far, though. Hopefully you have more stories up, but for now, I'm going to finish your story. Sasuke is... um...well idk if OOC is the right word... maybe horny is? lol, Yes, because I think they are ... in char. I mean, who knows what a horny Naruto or Sasuke would be like? And I actually like Sakura for once :D okay so she annoys me in the anime. She's mean to my poor Naruto ::hears a threatening growl from Sasuke:: hehehe, um... I mean your Naruto, Sasuke. I was only joking ::slowly backs away::

Inus_Kagome_Forever

WOW! This was a whopping good story.

From tip to tail it was facinating and I loved it. Though it took me a few nights to read it all, I stll laughed, cried, glomped the computer and talked to myself like it was all good!

You're an amazing fanfiction writer and I hope you'll email me so that we can begin a correspondnace.
Wouldnt that be delightful?
Anywho, congratulations on being a rare writer who finishes their fics, it seems like everyone is disconinuing these days!


YAY!

- Misery

Thank you so much for writing this.
it was wonderful.
I stayed up till 5 am reading this.

Ah... finished. Whew, the ending didn't change.

BeccaAmon, I... love... you...

Still! :::shakes hands at Sasuke::: I will not forgive you for what you did at that school! *Pouts, then rereads all lemony goodness* Well, okay then, long as you're a good fuck for Naruto.

*sob sob angst angst* It's the end. No, it's the end. I wish it weren't so, this story was so good. A fic to be proud of. But on a more serious note, this story is one of the best I have ever read and is on my Naruto top five radar. Been following this fic for a while and it is very well composed, and /very/ lemony. XD Kayo likes lemons...especially with this yaoi couple. I might've cried once or twice along the way too. The characters are true to heart and you can just /feel/ the emotions roiling around them. Really sad it ended. I shall breathlessly await any one-shots you write to accompany this.