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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Cold Silence
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. I read all of the chapters from start to finish in one sitting. I love the way you protrayed Sasuke, Naruto, and all of the other characters in this story. They feel very realistic, and yet in character to me. Thank you for writing such an engaging piece. I will be recommending this story under my profile page. :)
person Meg
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the latest chapter! Can't wait for the next one.....and tailsex. XD XD
person Lilith Wingates
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story and such great writing skills one of the Best! Naruto fanfics I have read. Please continue writing this and update soon!!! please! don't make me cry...
person angelicyokai
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I have read, on any of the fanfiction networks. It has good plot and great character developement. This is the first R-NC17 fic. I have read that isn't just smut. Don't get me wrong, you have TONS of great smut and I love every minute of it. I just think it is t tht that even without the boy on boy funtime, the story is wonderful. Oh, and I am sure you'll get to it, but I am dying to know what is up with Naruto's pendant, and if Sasuke will ever give it back.
person YaoiloverS
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story! I have to say this is the best N-17 story I have ever read! The detail, the action, the sex...*bloody nose* You must continue!!! Please,Please,PLEASE! This story is so good, I can't even describe how happy I am and how good this story is!!Update soon please!
person SpiritFighter
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaye! another chapter!!!! *huggles Becca* ^_^ so fun! I just got back from one of those trips! So I can see everything there. Aw. Fluffy-ness. ^_^ Oh please oh please oh please update soon!
person Mercury Tears
schedule August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When AFF.net shutdown I was so terrified... That I wouldn't be able to read your fic!! ;_; I had to read more of it, and then I start to spazzed out cause I forget your email ;~~, but thankfully AFF.net pulled through ^^ Your newest chapters are as good as all the others, I love them to bits ^^ please keep updating ^^
person yooo~
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:hugs fic: me wuffs. XD
person karen
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved your fic :D

actually, it's my first time reading a SasuNaru lemon fic. my friend wowie convinced me to read your fic and i'm glad i did. i'm not that all crazy for shounen ai, but i'm slowly getting used to it.

you have a great story going. am very curious as to what that pendant is to Naruto. please update soon :D
person heard the owl
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BeccaAmon_sama - I LOVE this fic sooooo much. There really isn't anything else i can say. You're a wonderful writer! Thank you so much for this fic.