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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Blaise
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, so we finally find out why Sasuke always went for the neck. Hmm and here I thought he had vampire tendencies. This chapter was so sweet and nice. I love this story and I can't wait until the next chapter!
person Sugah
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.....oh yes. i like this very much indeed. :D twisted and messed up and both of them are so needy..lonely..heee! luv it! can't wait for more...>XD
person Uzumaki Gina
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I LOVE UR FIC!! IT'S THE BEST!!
i'm serious, this is probably the best fic around here!! (no offence to the others just in my rankings)
IT's so touching!! plz plz plz update soon!! i love it!!!
person nialla
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
At first i was one Naruto's side. I was feeling so sorry for him and calling Sasuke a monster, but now I love them both! It's sweet. I really loved this fic! Keep going! I'm very interested and you're a wonderful author! ^_~
person xxkaskading_darknessxx
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fanfic, the whole ordeal is kinda realistic, y'know, like I can actually see that happening ^__^ It's so cute, your last chapter, too cute ^^ I actaully recommended this fanfic to a friend of mines and she loved it too, so keep up the good work ^_^
person sesshomaru
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please hurry and update!!
person Aimi_chan
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE the whole Sasuke/Naruto interaction!! They make such a CUTE couple! And your lemons are really good too so no worries. Just write more and more and more!!! ^^ I can't wait to see what'll happen next, since Naruto and Sasuke have already admitted they like each other... and I wonder what happened to Naruto's parents... in the snow... ^^ Well, write more and update soon!!!
person SpiritFighter
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaye! Another chappie!!! *does the new Spirial Falling chapter dance* ooh, finally they realize their feelings for eachother!! I hope you know that now everytime I drink hot chocolate I think of your fic. ^_^ please update soon!
person watermelon-gal
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know i have nothing to say except prob pages and paged pad pages of compliments for your story
but due to my lack of um extensive vocabulary i'm just going to sit here and poke you
continuously for an unnecessary amount of time..u you you update
=D
teeheeheee
*POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE*

have you updated yet????

*POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE* *POKE*

OK that was prob just getting annoying teehee
but im gona keep doing it!!
*threatens you*
SO YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!!
=D
*POKE*
teehee
person Kitsune
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! It's really nice! Please continue soon.. I really think you defined the characters really well and brought out their personalities well too. The emotion in this story is powerful and enchanwhicwhich always bring me back to reading it over and over again. please continue soon, I can't wait to read what happens next! ^^ Besides, I finally see some SasuNaru fluff action and care!