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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I SOOO Love this story! Its got the right amount of everything... i love seening naruto and sasuke get together after such troubling times .. WAHHH write more pleaseee i'll check everyday HEHE :P
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 8) Wow. Step back. Breathe.
Oh my fucking God!! This is a wonderufl story! Great plot!
I really love where ya going!
... You have a few spelling mistakes, like all of us, and I think it would be best if you were to have someone (a beta-reader) else read them for you before posting. As much as I would love for another quick update, I feel it would be best that way so that the reader could have a fluint reading.
But either way, this story kicks ass!
Please update soon! ^^
Ja ne~
Oh my fucking God!! This is a wonderufl story! Great plot!
I really love where ya going!
... You have a few spelling mistakes, like all of us, and I think it would be best if you were to have someone (a beta-reader) else read them for you before posting. As much as I would love for another quick update, I feel it would be best that way so that the reader could have a fluint reading.
But either way, this story kicks ass!
Please update soon! ^^
Ja ne~
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! this chapter was so sweet, sniff. I really liked it. It was sexy tnd ynd you can see the relationship developing. There seems to be stuff to be worked out but the boys are willing to give each other a chance. Happy me. Can't wait for the next updated. Keep it up, it's always a pleasure to see an update ^___~
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please. That would be ever so wonderful.
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, this is the best...BEST fanfic i've read so far.
You should publish this on fanfiction.net :P they'd inhale this fic.
Ah, the relationship is sooo nice now....
and the interlude was a nice touch....
but what's w/ sasuke's parents...is Itachi his his fanfic? What happened to Naruto's parents... And why does his aunt and uncle hate him?
I hope u'll explain the pendant some more, is it just a spiral design... normal metal pendant?
Looking forward to the next update :)
You should publish this on fanfiction.net :P they'd inhale this fic.
Ah, the relationship is sooo nice now....
and the interlude was a nice touch....
but what's w/ sasuke's parents...is Itachi his his fanfic? What happened to Naruto's parents... And why does his aunt and uncle hate him?
I hope u'll explain the pendant some more, is it just a spiral design... normal metal pendant?
Looking forward to the next update :)
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mm. Love. XD You should update soon, I love this story to bitties and peicies. I think it's all the secretive almost getting caughts....
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! the povs were cool b/c we were let into the different minds of sasuke and naruto. of how they viewed things and how they had different wishes and such. this chapter wase, ae, and the relationship is finally established! yay^___^ go becca! i liked how sasuke took the initiative to tell naruto how he felt and when he said he wanted to blow naruto rite there with sakura, lol, kinky exhibitionist^o^;;
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! the povs were cool b/c we were let into the different minds of sasuke and naruto. of how they viewed things and how they had different wishes and such. this chapter was nice, and the relationship is finally established! yay^___^ go becca! i liked how sasuke took the initiative to tell naruto how he felt and when he said he wanted to blow naruto rite there with sakura, lol, kinky exhibitionist^o^;;
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... ::melts::
... How come I have the feeling something bad is going to happen? XD;
... How come I have the feeling something bad is going to happen? XD;
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That's so touching...whaaa... you need to post another chapter soon.!! I love the way you created the characters and their enviorment.!!Reallyy luv you're story ! Post soon the next chapter!