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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person ochiba
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I.Worship.You...

OMFL! Well written smut with angst, humor, and UST --all in one fic?! How is this possible?! How did an old school style writer of R/NC-17 fanfics stumble into this fandom?! I was beginning to think that the Naruto fandom was just for 12 year old fangirls to enjoy with its abundance of cliches, poor writing, and waff overload, but you --oh great fanfic person that you are-- you have totally rekindled my interest. *adds you to her list of unfortely ely small list of fic goddesses* I am going to stalk you for the rest of your internet life now. Please update soon!
person rima
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like your fic i hope you'll update soon i keep checking the naruto page for new updates lol
i hope that there's gonna be another event that maybe will bring them closer(like in the lchapter of the hot chocolate --i really found you ending funny btw^_^)
but plz update sooooooon i cant wait!!!
person Tsuki-chan
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!!!! YAY! truly wonderful! so what happens next? I must know!!! please update this soon! Im dying to find out what happens next!
person Akito
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ai lol lol ic...an interlude...teehee...well I love your story! update soon!
person Quichi-the-Vole-Slayer
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome!. i love complicated relationships. I can't wait for you to update, please write more soon!
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think this fic was very well written... but it seems like a lot of angst is coming - ack.
just one thing doesn't make sense- why does Sasuke keep molesting naruto?! Is there a reason? and will we find out soon??
Geat fic, keep it up ^_^
person Fuujin
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've waited too long to review this story! I just want you to know that I really love it, and the interludes were great. I didn't think I'd get one. XD; They remind me of Kyou and Yuki the way they don't value the things the have and are jealous of others. Naruto and Sasuke both have great umiboshis on their backs. ^__^; Oh, and I really like Ino and Sakura. They just seem nice in this fanfic. In conclusion, this is like my favorite fanfic. Ever. o__o; XD
person asds
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still smashing great!!
Please continueee....you're story is so GOOD!
Believe me i know what i say :)
person Blaise
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You updated, you made my day!!! ^_^
Now am curious to what happened to Naruto's parents and how Sasuke's hatred turned into.....um kissing
person ayonoi
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the background story, it is nice to see where everything really started. How funny that they both hated each other for the things they perceived they had. I particularly liked Sasuke's pov...it was extremely interesting the way he hated Naruto just because he was willing to do the things Sasuke denied himself. He hated being replaced.

I really like this story, it has a good plot. Can't wait to see the next chapter.