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that was a nice suprise I can not wait for the next one.

PLEASE UPDATE! PRETTY PLEZE?! I REALLY REALLY REALLY WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTERS.

oiiiiiii!!!! hahhaah very amusing! i love your fic! Sasuke definately feels something more than lust toward Naruto... lolz...And da pendant....it has something to do with da plot right? lolz...update soon!

aaaahhhh will you update already!!! I need my fix!

CONTINUE!!!! CONTINUE I SAY!!!! alot of jerking off.... i loved the 69, bravado well if you do not continue i will hang you by a string over a pot of crusty toe jam! be weary!

Hm...where to begin for this. At first, I was a little hesitant to read your story. After all, more often than not, these are amusingly simple PWPs with no story and a seemingly poor grasp of the english language. By the second paragraph, I was pleasantly surprised by your writing style, and by the second chaper, I was hooked on the developing depth to what, at first, seemed just another excuse to get Sasuke into Naruto's pants ;). I really like how you stay pretty close to the whole Naruto and Sasuke outlook, even in this AU. Sasuke stays really consistent, and even his so-called family life and school life come together to make the complex Sasuke we all know and love. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but nothing that takes away from the story by being too glaring or frequent. The only suggestion I could make is that it's a little confusing sometimes when you jump from Naruto's to Sasuke's point of view (and then to Sakura's, whis is weird, cause she's not really important to the overall story too much and only goes to her POV once or twice). Maybe dividing it isectsections, one dealing with Naruto, the other dealing with Sasuke...that might be a little less confusing, format wise.

Oh my god, that's got to be one of the best fics around! I love it I love it I love it!!! ::hugs:: Thank you so much for creating such a great fanfic! Your ideas are wonderful, I love how Naruto's and Sasuke's relationships moves from non-con to something more.... ^^ I am indeed curious about the pendant, but I know you'll have a satisfying explanation when you judge the time is right. I have faith in you!!! Good luck, and I shall be impatiently waiting for updates

the greatest fic ever I love it just love it. Keep up the great work, hope you update soon *puppy eyes* please! i jsut love the way sasuske is so agressive *sigh* Ha his favorite flavor is Uzumaki. That was so cute *giggles* And i'm jsut dying to find out how sasuske got his hands on naruto's pendant ah the mystery.

I really really love your story, but one question: why isn't anything happening? this is almost like PWP. It's kinda frustrating to se how Sasuke that BASTARD(!!!!!) doesn't give Naruto his necklace back, I've got personal experiance with that -_-;. Sorry, I'm kinda in a bad mood, because I have to use the bathroom but I've painted/varnished(?) my nails, so I can't go!!! ^^;;; oh... I'm off then k? ^^;;; please write on very very soon. bye bye

Am addicted to your story. This is one of my favorite sasunaru story EVER!