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I loved the line in chapter 4, 'How can I think when I've got a hard dick rubbing against mine', I also loved the hot chocolate scene in the cafe, I really hope you intend writing more, and I shall look forward to reading it!!

Hello again! Y'know, if you want intelligence in your reviews at *all*, you're going to have to stop writing such great chapters, because right now I can't get much out except obsessive fangirlish squeeing. A million <3's for your fic! =D

This fic is SOO HOT! Hot hot hot hot ho-ot! I LOVE IT SO MUCH that I read it twice and will read it again and again each time you post a new chap. You fricken rule! Thank you!

hey wat the hell do u mean "a poor excuse for a lemon" ?
THIS STORY ROX
i luff it!!
and GUH i can't get enuf
i fell in luff with the way u write
hahahah
XD
luff the style
and descriptions
*drools*
update update!! =33

Wow, this is very welitteitten and I love your interesting take on naruto and Sasuke. :) I adore your Naruto, he's great! And you have nothing to worry over with your lemon...it was VERY hot....very VERY hot. Amazing, and they haven't even gone all the way yet....wonderful anticion ion and storytelling! :D

Can't wait for the next chappie!

You know, even it there were grammatical errors, I probably would not have seen them because I was in too much of a hurry to read ahead. When I first started reading the first chapter I wasn't interested, I only got to the second paragraph. The next day I gave it a try again, and I just loved !! I!! I wonder what's going on with sasuke's parents, and will naruto ever tell him about his? I'm really enjoying this fic because you can see that only naruto seems to be able to get around sasuke's shields. Keep on updating, I'm waiting anxiously to see what happens after he hot choco insident.

Eeeeeeek!!! That was sooooo good! You are wonderful! I forget...when did Sasuke steal Naruto's pendant? And what was up with Sassy and his wanting to suddenly float down like a Snowflake...he sounded kind of...well...flakey. Is he ok? Is everything going right at home? 'Cos...you know he won't exactly float down from the roof of the school building. I hope he isn't getting suicidal over something that's goin' down at his crib. Well...anyway, please update soon...and maybe I'll bake you some warm, delicious Macadamia Nut/White Chocolate Cookies! Mmmmmm....doesn't that sound good right about now? Oh....it does...

Wow! I love your fanfic. I hope you will update really really soon because I can't wait to see what happens next.

yay!!! another chappie! and a good one at that. you made me giggle to no extent about the hot chocolate! Teehee, I hope you update soon!

*dies* I didn't think this story could get any better. But low and behold, you did it. SOOOO GOOD! I am just drooling over the incredibly interesting relationship that Naruto and Sasuke have. It's fantastic. I'm still curious about how Sasuke obtained Naruto's pendant, I'mI'm sure you'll let us know when the time is right. Also, the hints that you keep dropping about both Narus ans and Sasuke's family is interesting. This story is great and I love it to pieces. Can't wait for the next chapter!