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My review didn't go through, darn it, it is hard to recreate. I really loved this chapter from your fic, it was poetic, I enjoyed that part a lot because it was sweet but not sappy at all, more like thoughtful meditations and a bit of discovery. At the beginning, I realized that Sasuke's attraction (or harrassment) was more hormone driven than anything but some hints here and there made me realize that it wasn't. This part really shows me that he feels for Naruto...and Naruto is allowing himself to follow his feeling, tentative, but merrily it seems. I loved the teasing quality of it all, and the naughty boys doing private things in public. oth,oth, what a bunch of vouyeaurs we are.

Keep up the writing, I like the plot and I have to tell you that the naughty parts made me giggle like a little girl (especially the coffee shop moment). Can't wait for the next chapter.

haha, you are truly a talented writer. the only thing i was confused by in chapter 4 was what did naruto mean when he said "do you want me too?" after sasuke told him to *ahem*. maybe you accidentally typed one o's too many^^;;? sorry about my lack of adjectives other than 'hot' in my last review, i just could not think straight after reading the three fics @_@! your smut scenes are among the best out there, definitely a favorite in my sasu/nau/narusasu fanaticism^___^ you have a wonderfully receptive, fantastic, and lovely imagination.

****ing ****, that's hot! wow, this is a really hot story. yay, it seems like a loving relationship may have begun. because that goodnight kiss was gentle and lingering? ^___^ wow...grstorstory, hopping around happily as i read the what i printed as i'm waiting for more. haha, congrats to mi, first yaoi i ever printed^^ you rule! totally great story, need to read more^-^

I really enjoyed reading this fanfic, I hope you update soon, You put everyone in there charcater, that's what I most liked. That you could actually Sasuke doing that and Naruto acting that way towards it. It made the stroy all the more convining.

rds rds from,
xXKaskding_DarkingXx

Intense, please update soon. ^-^

Omg t3h pr0n. I <3 you, can I have your babies?

[can't think straight after reading that]

omg
im about to die from squealing
>.<
holy shite
i just ADORE the way u write
u take care in describing in detail some small things but
it really adds to the whole story
and i luff it soooo much
and WAAAAHHH
BAD SASUKE
XD XD XD
and bad naruto
XD
aaahhh deeaarrr
and ican't wait to learn more about the pendant!
please udpate soon!!

omg, this is soo good! I really love it and I'm totaly hooked on your story! please update soon^_^

*squueees* i like this story, it's so lemony AND it has a plot! good job, keep it coming!!

I have to say that this is a great story!! Please write more quickly!!!!