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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Lady Moon
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chap! Can't wait for the next one. ^___^
person Koma
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is *good*! Can't wait for more! But one thing, whats up with the pendant? @@; Did I miss something?
person Atsumi Haruko
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... can't say how much I love your story! Just keep going! I'm your fan! ^_^
person lalala
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay Sasuke pov! yay quick updating! Good chapters, can't wait to see how things develop.
person asds
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more updates!
More sex!
yay!!
you rule!!
person kit
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice
continue
seems like Naruto's beginning to give in
person Lexy
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gaaah. *drools* *loves* Those two chappies were faboo! A couple of spelling mistakes, but that's perfectly fine. I am really interested in what the pendant has to do with Naruto's and Sasuke's relationship. And God help me, I LOVED the little detail about the fox with nine tails chime. Brilliant!
person The Schiz is too lazy to log in
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read this already and didn't get a chance to review. Man Sasuke is one Horny little bastard. I don't blame him though with Naru around. Wow the citrus in this story is spicy. Yum. I love good smut. I'll definately be back for more.
person Kashshaptu
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was really...hot! hehe, you should definitley write more^_^ update soon!^_^
person kitsune
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update
this is getting better and better
and I hope Sasuke isn't just using Naruto
update
maybe something should happen to one of them
would be nice
update