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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person Moeko
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah. This is good!!

I love your Sasuke. He's so sexy. And you've written Naruto as someone who can take it, whatever the 'it' may be. I've read one too many (SISSY)very uke!naruto sasunaru fics, if I read one more I think my head wixploxplode. -_- But I like your naruto so I don't that will happen if I read some more of your stuff... Give us some more!!

^_^
person Lexy
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am enjoying this story immensely. I am very interested in Sasuke's motivation for him doing what he's doing to Naruto. It seems like it's something about his homelife....he wants attention that he's not getting there? And not female attention, either. Attention from someone he respects, maybe. I hope you update soon, I can't wait for another chapter!
person glomper
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh this fic is nice! i want more more!
i love how sasuke is so aggressive .. heheee..
hope u'll update soon!
person SpiritFighter
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah! I love it. Such a sadistic basterd, that Sasuke is. I guess that's why I like him. Poor Naran han he knows he likes it O_< hehe... please update spoon!
person sarah
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...... that was amazing. It's obvious that Sasuke feels something for Naruto other then lust but wont admit it (especially to Naruto) what he needs is a healthy dose of jealousy!! ;P I love jealousy scenes, particulary ones where Sasuke's getting jealous over the dobe.... anyways, update soon!!!