rate_review Reviews

Hey, I loved the story sooo much. The story kept me at the edge of my seat because there were happy parts, sad parts, and exciting parts that made me want to read on and on... you are a very talented writer and you should continue... =]

alright starting chapter 30 now, and I have cried at every single chapter since my last review. I hate crying. but I cant stop reading.

haha, I am done. wow, that was an amusing ending. I think I am in-love with you.

I am only finished with chapter 21 right now, but I will be damned if I dont finish this story today before lunch hour. It is so friggin great, I will review again when I reach the end.

OH MAH GOD THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sniffle sniffle* Dude, the story TORE AT MY HEART IT WAS SO STRONG!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD Hee hee, I liked the story....>.< Okay, I'm good now. ^^;;; That was a REALLY great story. It was very sexual, true, but that's okay. XD It was really, really deep, and it was beautiful!! ;; PLEASE write more. You're a GREAT writer. I'm VERY impressed. ^^ GOOD LUCK!!

Oh my god!!! That's the best story i have ever read!!!!!!! It has so much emotion!!!!! Just like...wow^_^


Very very VERY well done!!

*thumbs up*great job!

Awesome story!! I'm so glad at how everything turned out! Ran was cool though I didn't like her in the beginning and Sasuke's family is rebuilding sort of! It was so deep at times. I think the things Jiraiya said about writing porn pretty much summarized your story ^_^ Hahaha It was so good! I'm happy I read it! Awesome work!

AAAAH! I never wanted it to end! Every time I reached the end of a chapter, I saw the number and was like "Noooo! So close to the end!" ... I think the best was when I got to chapter seven and went "OMG! I only have twenty-five chapters to go!" I was horrified... And I was only on chapter seven... Imagine my distress when I got to thirty-one!
This was truly an amazing story. I'm a very slow reader, and I read this entire story in about eight hours. For me, that's an amazing feat... Maybe you should write my English books so I'll feel compelled to read them instead of bumming notes off friends in my classes.
Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I've read the first chapter of Rising Sun and PLEASE write more for that one because it's SO interesting, and it's only one chapter. I'm so excited to establish whether or not my predictions for it are right.
Well, I'll end my little babble here, but honestly, you're a good writer, and you have good ideas. Don't let your imagination go to waste, kay? ;)

This is the single best NaruSasu fanfic I have ever read.

Its just....amazing.

I wish it never ended.

The way you describe things is wonderful :D

Beautiful.