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for Spiral Falling

by BeccaAmon

person SpoonNinja
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I'VE BEEN READING THIS FOR MONTHS AND I'LL TELL YOU WHAT...I LOVED THIS!!! My favorite story...you have no idea...so good! AND I LOVE YOU-but not in ona thos creepy stalker-ish kinda ways. You're an amzing writer and the you knack for detail is amazing...like Naruto waiting in the shadows, and the manerisms. The way you describe every little thing realy brings the characters to life. Well Done...VERY WELL DONE


You should be extremely proud of yourself.


Hope this isn't the END end...

SpoonNinja
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O M G that is the best fan fic i have read in a verry long time


cutoes to you

seriously the story was awsomely done with many twists. and thank you thank you for haveing them get back together in the end


i LOVED IT
person Kusachu
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. I can't believe it's really over...O.O It's...weird...I've been reading this story for like...forever, it seems. I don't even know if i have reviewed this or not, but you should know, this was, I THINK, the very first Sasuke and Naruto yaoi that i ever read. You have poisoned me to that pairing FOREVER! (I meant that in a good way) It seems that i can no longer take any other pairing seriously!!! And to think, there was a time when i was a Naru/Saku or Naru/Hina fan *blushes in shame* And yes, I used to root for Sasu/Saku. Really, honestly, this is an ultimate love story and it's sad that it's over, but yayness on the fact that it ended happy! Happy endings RULE ALL! I was a little worried around the part where Orochimaru came into the picture, but yay! The boys got back together! Gah! I'm babbling...I guess I'll leave it at: Thank you for this story! I enjoyed it very much and good luck on your future writing! ~Dead
person ladygizarme
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.... damn, it's over...... but wow.... sweetness ^__~ yeah, it could've gone on forever and ever, and i would have gladly read ^_______^ but, i think you're right, twas a good place to stop and i look forward to any one shots you may gift us with and future stories from you... congrats, twas an ultrashibby story dude :D ~lg
person Hazard
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent fic- gosh, an AU that actually works!
person Phoenix
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaah! That was THE best ending; it links back to the beginning beautifully and really brings out the meaning of the title ~ Keep up the good work!
person Tiina
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always like stories where characters are in school...don't know why.. You've made a nice (and long, yes!) story, maybe it wasn't the best I've red but it sure did made me want to read to the end.. :D
person dakara
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOHOOOOO THE BEST FUCK STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a lemon in almost every chapter WHOOOHOOOO it is those things that makes the life SOOOOO GOOODDDDD YUM I want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee @_@ but know I need to go and find my brother damn -______________________-;;
person yukiko
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've really loved ready this story, I must admit that at chapter 27 I soooooooooooooooo much wantedf to cry and read the end. I red the last sentence and continued the story :P Good work in here.
person izumi
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
perfect end to the almost perfect story [with the perfect story is where i'm the one that ended up with naruto] but alas, this is not my story. but really, i love you girl[?], write more. i'll be waiting for your next fic^^