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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, I always wondered if you were ever going to come back! Woot!
people like him were coughed up like black blood and spat onto the sidewalk.
That is a fantastic line. I love the imagery of the blackened lung and all that. Very awesome.
people like him were coughed up like black blood and spat onto the sidewalk.
That is a fantastic line. I love the imagery of the blackened lung and all that. Very awesome.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Read/skimmed through the 3 version on your livejournal. B and C are quite similar, yep. Don't know who is Kotetsu and don't really care. Hmm... Sasuke seeing Sakura only as a means to an end upsets me a bit, much like how Itachi is training her for his brother's sake. Must be the romantic in me. In both case, Haruno DISGUSTS me. EEYUCK doesn't cut it. Please tell me he didn't molest/rape little Sakura, or I'd rip his nads out and lock him in a prison with BIG horny brutes for inmates.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I totally love this story!
Is this a KakaSaku story? I love that pairing!
Hope you update soon ^_^
Is this a KakaSaku story? I love that pairing!
Hope you update soon ^_^
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not gonna lie, I love this story against my own will! I read the first chapter and didn't like the story, but for some reason, I kept reading. And the more I read, the more I wanted to read! Now I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally love it! Please please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This is so good! I really love how Sakura and Naruto laugh at Shikamaru and Chouji for getting stuck with Ino! Ha! Ha! :)
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this odd before, but thought I'd misread or something, but this time I re-read it, and lo and behold! You said Itachi bit his thumb and dripped his blood onto the sketch, but later when Genma questioned Sakura on the blood, Sakura hid the bandaid on her thumb. So whose blood is it? Both???
BTW, I really appreciate Leafy Girl for getting you to keep writing this. Here's some of my own: GAMBARE! Keep going! Great Work! Don't stop with the updates!
BTW, I really appreciate Leafy Girl for getting you to keep writing this. Here's some of my own: GAMBARE! Keep going! Great Work! Don't stop with the updates!
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Itachi-Sakura relationship in the first version makes more continuity sense, as I've always thought their relationship was based on mutual understanding (and sex). The second version completely butchered the image of Itachi I had of him so far in this fic. Granted there's the "monster in his home, human in her home" thing; it still threw my image of their relationship right out the window.
But the most important thing is... WHEN are you going to stop wimping out on the sex scenes? It's Aff.net! I want my smut dammit! XD
But the most important thing is... WHEN are you going to stop wimping out on the sex scenes? It's Aff.net! I want my smut dammit! XD
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, dude... Now here's hoping you update regularly. ;)
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.....this is.....amazing. And I'm crazily addicted. And since I'm always really bad at the constructive part of reviews (besides offering to worship the ground you walk on......authors/authoresses all need their ego boosts, right? XD), I'll just ask you to continue whenever you can. Again, wonderful story!