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hm...now i'm even more confused as to sakura's past and everything that happened before...

man, your chapters are getting longer and longer...

thanks for the chapter.

Can't wait to read about the model! I have a feeling of who you may have in mind. I am curious about Itachi's eye, I hope you go into more detail about that. I can't wait to read more!

My vote is to go with your new idea. It is different and intriguing, and in my opinion, allows for more character depth, which seems to be your goal for this story. I would not mind re- reading the story, as it is already brilliant, and any re- write to make it better wouldn't be in the least tiresome.

Continue the story its nice to be re-written! I personally enjoyed your story! You plot is cute and different, so in a way i'm sayin. co. continue the story... =P

well am not going WTF! but i just want to say if you do decided to redo it start a entirely different link for it becasue some times when you revised it mess a really great story up and personal i like how you have it right now it's great and very awesom possumish so all i can really say is keep up the kick ass story and ill read no matter what becasue your a great aurthor who likes sakura and i don't find many of those!r sor sorry for not shutting up just have fun when you write this story and it's good either way!!!=P

I am totally for the Sakura-centric version. You've made her a much more interesting character than she is in the manga anime, given her a stronger will and personality (while still, with miraculous skill, keeping her in-character), and it fascinates me. I like the traditional. official sakura from the manga/anime, but she really is rather weak there, physically and emotionally, it seems, and she doesn't seem to be a person in her own right - most of her 'scenes' are in relation to someone else (compared to Sasuke or Naruto, thinking about Sasuke or Naruto, talking about Sasuke or Naruto, etc). It's EXELY ELY refreshing to see a fanfiction writer portray her in such a way that she interacts with otheut iut is still her own self, independent of what others are doing. Most fanfics either have her isolated and being her own person, or interacting with others and being their person, as in, being what they make of her, and not what she makes of herself. I'm no feminist, so my opinion is not because Sakura's a girl, and I know that everyone is influenced by others, but I think in Sakura's case, Kishimoto-sama took it too far. I don't think any human being's personality and thoughts should be that dependent on what other people say and do.

Oh, my. That rant wasn't supposo beo be there. ^^()

Um, in short (and please forgive my earlier wordiness) very YES to the eleven Sakura-centric chapters. I shall read them all with pleasure. ^^

I wouldn't mind at all to reread the whole story again with the edits. This is an awesome story and reading it again would be fun. I'm glad your inspired in it now, would really suck if you weren't. Anyways, the idea you have for the plot is a very nice idea! i looks forward to the next chapter!

Personally, I really like the way the story's going as is. Though there is slight more focus on Sakura, I don't think the other characters are skimped over. In fact, the multi-views make the story better and more rounded (at least in my opinion). Either way, I'll definitely continue reading the story, but my vote is not to change it, go with what you have. It's awesome. :-)

by all means, do it your way. Rewrite it however you like it, whatever you think is for the best. Im voting for option 1

*___*~ nice fic