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by tealeaf

person dragonflyelj
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Tea Leaf,
As always your work is exceptional! My internet is down right now, so I had to print this out to read it, so I shared it with another friend who is a Naruto fan as well, she read all 31 pages in one sitting. She was just as obsorbed by it as I was. She laughed at the image of Gai being the gym teacher, that part was great! I am totally into the mystery of Itachi n Sakura, and can't wait to read more. Oh, I loved the role reversal on Sakura/Sasuke! lmao when he turned on that charm and she was unaffected by it, inner Fly was going HELL YEAH!!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Big huggles girly, n great job
Fly
person Xero
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow.. good story.. I can only assume that Haruno is the main character of this story??
yeah, that'd be my only beef with the story so far.. Sakura took the only move that Naruto was good at.. but i guess without the trouble'd past form the manga, theres no need to worry to much about him.
person Bealmira
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is so different than all of the other ones I've read. You're good. You are oh so very good. Bravo. The discription of Haruno's painting... That was good too. Wow. I hope you update soon!
person dragonflyelj
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOOHOOOO!!!!! another chapter! It rocked! I can't wait for the next one. OMG I have been trying to log onto AFF for like 4-5 days now, always get too many people connected message, so I was already happy when I got in, then I saw my favorite Naruto authoress had updated, happy day for me! hehe. Yes I am gushing, but I do so love your work for a reason. You are really good. It is such a pleasant change to be able to find a het fic that was written by an adult. oh, geez, I won't even start a rant, hehe. Big Hugs! Hope all ell ell with you,
Fly
person Kasiree
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is the gonna be another SasuSaku? Yeah, anyway.. Sakura already has a girlfriend? Oooh, is it Gaara? Make it Gaara! Hehehehe, I leaning on GaaSaku more than SasuSaku, but SasuSak's also good. Hope you update sooner.. Sakura sure is synical ain't she?
person Ivy
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I changed email cozthe last one does not work... ur fic realy stands out! Is it sasusaku? or anything else. M/F ryt? email me J!
person dragonflyelj
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Tea Leaf,
I just noticed that the review I posted never showed up, so I am reposting it. I absolutley loved this first chapter, and anxiously await your next chapter. This second story has clinched it, I am a devout fan! lol.
Huggles!
Fly
person The Sadist
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You were right in saying the characters would be differenom hom how you portrayed them in The Butterfly! I think this is an impressive start to what looks like to be yet another fantastic story. As the first chapter, it's kind of hard to really formulate any solid opinionthe the story, but i love how you've depicted all the characters, especially Sakura. It's always interesting to have different interpretations of Sakura, especially ones that are well written. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Isabella
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad you wrote another fic! and this one is so interessting and unique yet again. i love the whole idea of Sakura being protected by the Akatsuki and the little fight between her and Kakashi! (^3^ KakaSaku love!) though there is a part that i'm not to fond of by thats just me, everything is really good!......i just don't like NejiTenten >< BUT that won't stop me from reading this awesome fic! XD
Can't wait for the next chapter! :3