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by Tsukiyomi

schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay i do not understand are you finished with this story or not i hope not because this story is way to good to be finshed to me it feels like u have left it half finished i hope u will continue this story i would really appreciate and i am amazed at ur writing ability i mean a story about kakashi its very different i also want to hear sasuke and naruto's answer to kakashi's question about their existence and why there always fighting also the answer to sasuke about what sakura says about loving him anyways keep up the good work ja ne deedeesan
person Ytha Lee
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was the very best chap.. SasuSaku totally rox!!
person hiro
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, I really like this^^!more so that what i originally expected :D! anyway, please write more ne... i'm so eager to know what will happen to kakashi and why ke kept hurting himself :D!... err... would there be some possible itachi x kakashi, even if it's a non-con one? I know it's sick ^^;;... but i kinda want to see that... besides, there isn't any itachi x naruto around so... ;)... i surely hope that anko and gai won't die... please write more soon :D:D:D!!!
person cdkobasiuk
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a complex and intereting fic so far. I am really interested to see where you take it all.

cdk
person WTF
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought Anko was a special jounin? I mean, if the rapist is Orochimaru I'll understand, but from your description of the out of shape men involved, they don't even sound like ninjas, so why would Anko have problem defending herself against them? Even Sakura can get out of that situation if she can keep a cool head and perform the replacement technique.
person kit
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
continue
person dragonflyelj
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nope no breaks for you, get the next chapter out NOW I say! hehe. So what have you done to my precious se? he? he is a cutter? I must read more. I really like what I read so far, please update soon.
person Cuito
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Its so good! Can't wait for the next update to this story!! ^_^
person Anatra DeSylvianno
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah...suicidal Kakashi! Why? Or...is he just a masochist? Hmm...that's what's being hinted at, but really, he should just find himself a BDSM partner and play for a bit. Anyhoo...good stuff! Rather, Great stuff! I'm anxiously waiting more!!! :E
person .
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great.
Hope you update this soon.