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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. finally!. I have been wondering if you had givin up on this story. I am very glad that you chose not to and good job. Please update soon ! :D
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic. The storyline is a bit sketchy. There isn't much character development either but the originality of the fic keeps me tacked to it. Something that had me confused were the dialogues. I couldn't tell who was talking when you had Hinata, Liz, and Ayumi talking. I was so confused that I decided to skip it. I'll be honest though, the fic has great potential. Just keep up the hard work and I'm sure that it will turn out to be a very nice fic if you keep at it.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter but I hope you keep on with the story it has a great plot to it but why would kids play with fire by a mansion... That is where the Hyuuga's lived and I would of thought there would be more than 1 group of shinobi from the village Hinata is at and hope Hinata comes back and sees everyone...Will Naruto and Hinata be a pair in this story
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this story. keep it coming!
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Hinata saves Konohomaru and falls off a cliff and everyone thinks shes dead. Then we find out she is in a village of Sight but they cover there eyes when battle and train so they use there chakra to see everything. I would like to know more of this story cuz it is very good and sparks up my curiosity of the story you have written for Hinata and Naruto,Neji and TenTen too this will be good to read hope you update e-mail when you do plus I have a few questions to ask
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bouhouhouhou this fic is death.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!!! PLEase... UPDATE SOON!!!!
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Great job! Keep it going! or else... ;)
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story a lot! Keep it coming!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story - quite enjoyable! I hope you will update soon as I can't wait to see the reactions when the Leaf shinobi see Hinata and Hinata's reaction when she remembers everything! Keep up the good work!