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for Servitude

by Aleya

person rei
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice fic! and please update soon!!!
person kayoko
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
w00t! that was nice action by neji. Very neji-like.

For some odd reason this pairing feels very real. *pat* Kind of makes me feel sorry for hanabi, though.

anyways, thanks for the new chapter.

hope you have a fun vacation if we don't see another chapter before you leave.
person Chelsey
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I'm enjoying this more and more!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Neji Lover
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Hiashi is such a damn bastard. I hope the hokage lady helps Hinata and Neji out. Write more please.
person Milky Way
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please! I hope you update soon.
person Corn God
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I still think this is an awesome and strong fanfic, there are never any decent ones that begin with the Hyuga's and actually continue on with a real sort of plot.
Keep writing. ^_^
person sharingank
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just LOVE this story! Neji and Hinata...too good. Please update soon!!! PLEASE!!!
person yume
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Never thought it'll come out this... good? But you got great plan inside your mind, update soon or rather fast
person Corn God
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, you're a great descriptive writer and everything so I hope you come up with some new chapters soon ^_^
person Chelsey
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaa! She's being married off! Nooooooooo! how can this be? Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful