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by Aleya

person ayonoi
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*must not kill Hiashi* I knew things were not going to be easy. I hate the man, dude, is he really trying to break them apart so he can *breed* Neji with Hanabi? (shudders) or is he trying to see if Neji feels something for his daughter. I doubt it is the second choice, I think he is evil. EVIL.

Nooo, I want Neji and Hinata together. FIGHT!! guys FIGHT!!

This is a great fic, it's good, it's excitng, it's hot. love it.

Keep it up and hopefully, an update will grace us.
person Cookie6
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT! Hinata and that guy?! I hope Hinata's mom or at least her sister would defend her! Please write more.
person Melissa Kang
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Neji should kick Hiashi's ass or something. Somebody, kick his ass! I hope that Hinata doesn't end up with that 24 year old dude. Nice chapter.
person Angie
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooo! I knew that something like this would happen. Stupid Hiashi! I hope tHinaHinata says something and beats her father up. Update please.
person Milky Way
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would think that Hinata's mom and sister would love Hinata. They should help her out or something. Good chapter. Write more please.
person MarbelGirl
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hinata, beat the snot out of all the Hyuga's (except for your man). That damn Hiashi and his hugh ass like personality! Kill him already. Update!
person Neji Lover
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...I'm sad now. Why oh why did another clan have to be in the way. Here I thought that those two would finally get to have some time together. I hope the next chapter proves to be a kick ass chapter and when I say "kick ass" I mean kick the ass of Hiashi. Continue please.
person MarbelGirl
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's odd that Hinata's father just watched them having fun. I wonder what Neji was going to say. Does he think that they wont be together? Man, I hope that they end up together. Great fic!
person Neji Lover
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was short, but great. Is Hiashi going to make Hanabi and Neji marry earlier because of what he saw Hinata and Neji doing? I hope that that wont happen. Update!
person Cookie6
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you so much! Every chapter that you write makes me want to read more. How do you do it? I hope that Neji and Hinata don't get in too much trouble for their play time activity. Please write more.