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for Servitude

by Aleya

person Angie
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What is going to happen in the next chapter? I have a feeling that it is both good and bad. Does Neji even love Hinata or is it just physical? Phonominal chapter.
person Milky Way
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Write more! I want more Neji and Hinata action! I love everything about this fic. Update soon.
person Melissa Kang
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiashi must be up to something. He seems like the type to do very rash things. I hope it is not too bad. Continue as if your life depended on it!
person Polka dot
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What kinda father is he? He should've turned on the hose and gave them a good cooling off!
person yume
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your the reason why I started reading this incest pairing. I don't know I'm always chec the the site to know if this is already updated. I can't stop reading this, maybe because of the pairing, some lemon and the deep story you tried to comliment in it. Just update soon... i guess..
person Cookie6
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Neji must be happy now because of the fact that Hinata and him were able to do a few erotic things together. I hope that her dad will make them get married or something. Then those two will finally be able to be together. Please write more real quick.
person Angie
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You update! I waited so long, but I guess it is worth the wait if you keep on writing such terrific fics. UPDATE!
person Neji Lover
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Naruto sure forgot about his affen ton towards Hinata real quick, not that I'm complaining. Now Neji has the go ahead to be with Hinata. Great Neji/Hinata scene. It was unbelieveable. Continue as soon as you can.
person Melissa Kang
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is Hiashi going to make Neji and Hanabi marry sooner then expected because of what he saw? I hope not. Neji seems to like Hinata's breast doesn't he? Those two are so cute!
person Milky Way
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You said that Hiashi say a body. I hope it is Naruto taking care of "himself". That would be funny. Continue and I'll love you forever!