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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hinata is finally going to do something for Neji. I thought this day would never happen. The next chapter proves to be very interesting. Great job on this fic.
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear GOD! That was an awesome chapter! I hope you write more soon. This is getting good. Update soon. Check out my fiction if you get the chance it's called Rose of Uchiha. My pen name is HisBeautiful. Thanks!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*smacks forehead* These kids, geezzzzz...they forgot they were in an open space and her dad saw, damn it. Suspenful indeed. I liked the fact that Hinata is actually responding and being forward with Neji, I always joke that it is the quiet ones that pull the best surprises. But damn it, I hope they are allowed to stay together. ARghhhh. This is a good cliffhanger, hopefully there will be another chapter soon!
Keep it up, you doindoing a good job.
Keep it up, you doindoing a good job.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue this! I mean it. You're the reason why I started to like NejiHina fics and I hope you'll update soon!
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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You have a very nice story going here but I think you should bother to learn the character's names and personalities better before attempting to portray them. Shino is hardly one to just burst out laughing even in such suprise. And who the hell is Akino? There is no character in Naruto thus far by that name. However Hinata's teammate whom you were refering to is named Inuzuka Kiba. Kiba, not Akino. At least you got the dog's name right as well as their Jounin's as well.
Your story would be really great, however I suggest going back and actually reading (or watching) the series first and then return to this fanfic when you can portray and wirte the characters believably.
You have a very nice story going here but I think you should bother to learn the character's names and personalities better before attempting to portray them. Shino is hardly one to just burst out laughing even in such suprise. And who the hell is Akino? There is no character in Naruto thus far by that name. However Hinata's teammate whom you were refering to is named Inuzuka Kiba. Kiba, not Akino. At least you got the dog's name right as well as their Jounin's as well.
Your story would be really great, however I suggest going back and actually reading (or watching) the series first and then return to this fanfic when you can portray and wirte the characters believably.
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Does Hinata know that every time Neji sees her with Naruto, that he pays special attention to her? Is that why she invited Naruto to come along home with her? Update soon so that I can have some meaning to my life. I live for your story.
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You updated! I'm so very happy to know that you did! These last three chapters are a god send. I think that it is the most fantastic fic I've ever read! Update soon!
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Neji and Hinata need to take care of there needs with each other so that they can finally be happy. Continue this lovely story.
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Neji is so sexy it hurts. Neji and Hinata should just do it already. I mean, Hinata already likes Neji now, right? Please write more. I hope you make the next chapter longer then ever. Once again, fantastic chapter.
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can't believe you updated. I thought that you were going to not update at all. I love this chapter of yours. It was so cool and fun to read. Is Hinata's father going to find out that Hinata got stronger or something? Update!