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for Servitude

by Aleya

person Neji Lover
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chap. Love the scene with Neji having fun with himself thinking of Hinata. Write more.
person ayonoi
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dances around* Sexy!!! Hinata wants Neji *dances some more*. I like the direction it is going, for some reason jealous Neji seems to make him hotter. I love this couple, I want to see more XD!! Good to see an update, do another one soon!

person Neji-nii-san
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, where's the next chapter? And make it longer :) j/k
Looking forward for more of the story...which is going great, so far.
person Korahna
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, when's Hinata going to return the favor? Update soon.
person darker magenta
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story, glad updaupdated!
person Cookie6
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you updated! I'm so happy! I loves chs chapter! Perfect! Please write more!
person Angie
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I hope thaji cji convinces Hinata to be with him instead of Naruto. Don't get me wrong, I love Naruto but for some reason I don't think that he would be all that erotic when he makes love. Now Neji seems like the type of guy that makes you hot and heavy with lust and desire. Hinata needs a man like that. I hope the "do it" soon. Continue please.
person Neji Lover
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...interesting fanfic you got here. I love it. It seems that Neji is holding his "other half" to elf elf when he is with his cousin. Does that mean that he will next really show his affection for her fully? Does he take care of himself right after he does those things with Hinata, because if he does why not make a little paragraph so that we can read it. That is good writing. People need to wriore ore Hinata/Neji fics out there.
person Melissa Kang
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you make your chapters a little longer in you next update if you can. I love this chapter. Neji is so passionate when he is trying to get a rise out of Hinata. Update as soon as you can.
person MarbelGirl
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hottttttttttttttttttttttt! Did my room just get hotter? I'm sweating here. Updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!