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for Servitude

by Aleya

person Milky Way
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know I reviewed already, but I wanted to say that my friend wrote her review name wrong. It says Cookie5 (she swore she wrote 6). I know it is not important but she just wanted you now now thatis sis suppose to be Cookie6 not Cookie5. Once again, great story. I love it, I love it, I love it.
person sirencry (logging in... too troublesome)
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story, please continue
person sirencry (log in. in... too troublesome)
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story, please continue
person Korahna
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love hyuugacest fics, is she going to be the only one he serves or are you going to throw other members in this,
is her dad going to find out about the two of them. Update soon.
person Cookie5
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Neji is so sexy in here. I don't know why I love Neji/Hinata fics. Those fics are always spicy and cool. Please write more. I wonder what will happen in the next chapter. If you can, can you e-mail me when you update?
person Angie
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. I always felt that Hinata and Neji would make a cute couple. I hope that Neji only serves Hinata. More lemon please. Update soon.
person MarbelGirl
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, you do know how to make a hot chapter! Will Neji try to get Hinata flustered each time she sees Naruto? Will there be any scenes where Neji and Hinata actually make love? I hope so. Those two are so kawaii! Update now...please.
person Milky Way
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello. My friend Cookie6 (who reviewed for you) recommended me to read your fic. I'm a huge Neji/Hinata fan. I love your fic! Neji is my favorite character ( he is also Cookie6's favorite character...well, she also likes Itachi, Kakashi, and a few others but Neji is her favorite). I hope that Neji and Hinata have more scenes together were they are intimate with one another. Please, please, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update as soon as you can. I don't have the internet so I have no e-mail address (sad, I know). Just tell Cookie6 when you update and I'll come running to her house to read it!
person Melissa Kang
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic. I enjoyed it. I hope you continue this story. More Neji please.
person ayonoi
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really interesting. Not enough NejiXHinata out there so this is a nice addition. Plus it feels like Neji is truly jealous of Naruto and he doesn't want to relinquish his place of "servitude" to Hinata. I hope to see another chapter to this. I like it.