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You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

CASE ONE -
Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

CASE TWO -
Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

CASE THREE -
Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary

how sad... i feel so bad for Naruto and Sasuke..

damn you Orochimaru...

WAI! You made my heart hurt... ;_;

::sniffles and wipes tears from eyes:: ne, that was such a SAD ending...i was all teary-eyed for practically the last half of the story...ive also read a coupla of your other fics and theyre good too...demo, next time try not to kill our suke-chan! ;_;

thats was a sad story.....*sniffles* but it was very good. ///_^= my only suggestion is DONT TORTURE SASUKE!!! i mean hes angsty enough already why add to it?! its crazy. you could have also indicated where the whole memory thing came in it was kinda confusing... other than that it was very well written, had a lovely plot and even though it was long(er) held my attention. if only other fics were as good as yours. YAY GO YOU!

That was really heavy,I almost choaked at the end,chest froze.Whoa,did not see that coming.I would like to see someone using fisting as a form of pleasure...intense,lengthy process but doable.
Hot but dispicable.Poor them.Wild ride of a fic.

Such a sad story.. I felt my heart breaking at the ending.. over all it was a beautiful story but i did have one problem with it, lke parts leading to the ending.. for example: you could've made it more clearer that Naruto had fallen asleep, because in the story you made it seem like he closed his eyes for a minute and then when he opened them again Sasuke was bleeding with a kunai in his chest... and you could've also stated that he was dying and more clearly identify the events leading to his death, becuase the last bit left me a bit confused (but then again it could be just me..o.0) and another thing..

why does Sasuke have to die??! *cries uncontrollably*

anyway it was overall a great story, heart wrenching, but good! keep up the good work! i'll be expecting more great stories from you! and what ever did happen to the people of Konoha? did they forgive Sasuke? *questioning look*

luv ya!
~~Sazuna~> 0.o!!?~~

*sniffles* I'm seriously crying right now. That was sooooo damn sad, but I loved it. It was beautiful. I hope you can continue this fic.......and make it maybe not so sad? I can't imagine how Naruto is feeling. Please post another chapter so there's a happy ending. Oh please oh please. *loveslovesloves*

OMG!!!! THAT WAS SO SAD!! I was actually listening to a sad song when I read that last part too. What a coincedence...anyway, great story. Hope you update your other story, Unnatural. I'm still reading one of your other stories on fanfiction. A Very Naruto Christmas. I like it! Well, until next time, Ja Ne!
Queen of Anime ^_^

Very well written, with a thought out writing structure and style. All together a nice piece, although there were a few culture things that were rather american sounding. Did he go to Tokyo U in the show? if not nice touch~

well written, thanx~