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You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

CASE ONE -
Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

CASE TWO -
Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

CASE THREE -
Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary

T.T First of all, just wanted you to know I registered specifically to leave a review for this story. Idk when you wrote it or when it was finished, but I just finished it and...oh my god.
I was crying when I thought it was Itachi in the gallows. Once I found out it was Kakashi, I seriously broke down. And then Itachi...god Itachi's last words T.T Oh dear lord I'm gonna be sick from crying....
I finished reading this not long after I read the updated manga chapters and...lord. I'm so depressed @.@
I loved the story though, I really did. It upset me greatly but it's probably one of my favorite fanfictions ever. I will always remember it, truly.
Could you tell me what the first line of Itachi's last note to Sasuke says? The first word or so kind of messed up, and I can't read what the "L" word is. Is it "Letting"? It just says "tingting" so I have to guess...lol

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Oh, wow. This is such an awesome story. Morbidvixen sent me the link over at Y! Gal. I'm on Chapter Three. It's midnight, and I can't put my laptop down. I'm literally riveted. Excellent... no... beyond excellent storytelling. I'm very excited about finding out what will happen.

Wow, even though I only read the beginning and the end, I really think this story is amazing. Very creative and beautiful.

Woot! great story, ps please update 'unnatural'!!!!!

I just finished your story, and I just had to comment. It was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. The end had me in tears, when Itachi woke up in the jail cell, and I knew what Kakashi had done. Tears I tell you! I love your take on the Uchiha clan as a prostitution ring. It was definately a new twist and would give much of Itachi's past actions cause. Not to mention his relationship with Kakashi. Thanks for writing this story. ^_^

Amazing story but I will always hate you for making me cry so much...and killing...them

This is definitely one of my absolute favorites.
The ending was so complete, and I liked the twist of Kakashi's death instead of Itachi's in the last few chapters.
Great job! ^.^

I am on chap13,so i will say this is a pretty irresistable tale, kinda harsh,but that seems to be your thing.You stayed up late to post this chappie so I for one will thank you,uuhh,thank you!