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for I think I better leave right now

by purrfectly679

schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful story and I hope to hsr more from you.
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
............... OMG!!!!OMG!!!!!....... this story is amazing and absolutely heart wrenching!!!! I definitely can not wait for the next chapter!!! And though I would love for this story to go on forever I hope that it ends soon with Naruto and Sasuke getting together!!!!!!!(at least you BETTER END IT THAT WAY!!!!!! *prepares missiles and other weapons of mass destruction to kill you if Naruto and Sasuke don't end up together*) Okay, got to go
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was just curious to see if you were going to ever write more chapters for this? I just hated the ending that way (I mean don't get me wrong it was a GOOD angst chapter but I love happy endings for my boys)! Anyways, please let me know if you can!
person A Ravens Song
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaah! Please Please please continue this story! I love it! Plus Sasuke slept with Naruto that one night when NAruto was drunk right?! So it can still be an mpreg and then NAruto and Sasuke can be happy and Lee can get with Sakura. PLEASE continue that last chapter left me heart broken!
person A Ravens Song
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention...this last chapter made me cry!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so fucking sad.i have never cried so much in my life,never.i am practicly emotionless and i dont know when was the last time i cried.not even for my parents,or even when my sis ran away and we didnt know where she was. i read your story in one go and i have been crying for five hours straight. my parents came in and when they saw me crying they called my doc to see if was ok.when he finally left i continued reading and i cried some more.this story is very beutiful you wrotte the characters personalities so well they werent even out of character. I just wanna tell you something:if they dont have a happy ending i will personally find out were you live and tottally kill you in a slow painful death. hope they have a happy ending because they tottally deserve it.

Love-Tsukiyomi
person Sophade
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...
You van't even imagine how sad what you wrote is.
I really cryed in front of my screen, and I'm still crying, it's the moment Naruto said "don't...leave...me..." that I craqued and couldn't hold back the tears...
please tell me it isn't finished! All I want to see is a happy ending! I want to see Sasuke and Naruto happy!
At the moment just before it says that Sasuke's running away from the place, I almost imagined Him being the bastard he is, always confident and all, and that he had been there, just behind Naruto when the blonde says that he loves him too... Really you broke my heart too! To tell you the truth, as soon as I'm finished with this message, I'll search for a fiction where I can see them together and happy, it's the only way to stop my tears...
Your fiction is really good I don't know how you did that, how you made all those emotions affect me, and how you made a crying Sasuke normal he wasn't even OOC, he's deeply in love with Naruto and Naruto did all he could to break his heart... He is even really strong to just cry like this, any normal person would have faint or would have screamed and run ... I would...

I'm completely depressed, how could you do this to me?

Please, I leave you my E-mail, I would like you to answer me, even if it spoils me or something I don't care I just need to know : is this the end? are they really going to end like this? : Sasuke arried with Sakura, not even loving her, and Naruto alone with Hinata by his side maybe but loving Sasuke, not her, Sasuke thinking that Naruto is happy, with her... and all
say, why did you let Sasuke think Naruto went out with her? it's so harsh for his heart and soul!!
*wipe tears* please answer me, I really need to know or I'll be depressed for the rest of the month at least, or even the year!

thank you, great writer,
Sophade, sophrite@hotmail.com, Belgium.
person Kiba
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I think your fic is great! demo, the're too many mistakes on words.
should I expect you to continue it?
Tnen could you please addd me in list, my email - orcinusorca@list.ru

You know thay you are quite cruel person, to make Sasuke and Naruto suffer so much, besides it turnes up to be like a soap movie. to tell you truth i overslept for my job early morning, i got so engrossed into love scene between the two. thank you for making it passionate, not everyone could last it so long:)
I've encountered that prolonged love scene before only in one fic - don't rememver its name involving Athrun/Kira


person Len
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, to say the least, Sasuke's confession almost made my heart throb in pain. xD Chapter 15 really almost made me cry. I would've cried if I wasn't too tired to really take in the emotions that your story gives off. ^_^ I was even listening to a rather serene, yet melancholy piano pieces from FFX-2. It's called Wind Crest ~ The Three Tails // Piano Collections. You might know it, have it, but anyway, I thought it fitted well with the story. If it were animated, it would've been nice. ^_^ Please update soon. I'm dying to know if Sasuke is willing to marry Sakura... on behalf of Naruto's sake, or confront to Naruto once more or something.
person Ren
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First off, to let you know, this fic made me cry, yes, even after my 3rd time reading it over months after the 2nd time. I really adore this fic, and how it's so wonderfully written. Have you ever thought about writing a book? Haha ^^;; Well, my brain isn't really forming coherent thoughts right now, but..just a question... I'm not trying to be a pushy reader who always says "HEY YOU, UPDATE NOW OR I'LL ____", but I was wondering why there had been no updates/new chapters for a while? Well, I hope you continue this fic, I can't wait to see what happens between Naruto and Sasuke. :)