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by purrfectly679

person cibiboy
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my mouth is like hung over that is so great im new to AFF so i was able to read you story non stop since ch 1 i really dont want saku to be sad but i really wish it will be naruto and sas in the end mybe ino will tell saku the truth about sas and that will leave room for nar+sas its just a really great story update soon.
P.S you lil mini story is so funny keep it up!!!!!!
person annabellemanix
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::bawling eyes out:: that was SOOOOSOOOO sad!!!! poor sasuke-kun!!! i hope naru-chan comes around soon and tells him before sasuke and sakura get married! ;_; also, could you put me on your mailing list? and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read your fic like four times already, in different places (i think the last one was in your livejournal... not sure) and imagine my surprise and delight when i stumbled upon it here! I know for a certain that this is finished... why havent you posted the rest yet??? Please do, so all the other people will know of Sasuke and Naruto's love!! (giggles) Your fic is one of the very very few that is very very dear to my heart. Share the love!!! ^_^
Your fic made me cry really really bad, but in a good way. (pats you in the back) If i could go there and give you a BIIIIIGGG hugg for writing this- i would.grin.
but i think i'd settle for a review... so yeah... I think i'll go read this one more time! I never get tired of it!! ^_^
Cheers.
person Moon_Shadow
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I loved your story!!! It made me cry! Loved it! Please update soon! Oh and I would like to join the mailing list please!
person ....
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story!.. i really do.. this story for me is one of the best!
person Akire
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I have ever read in my entire life! And...I mean that with all sincerity. I feel so so so sorry for Sasuke, so so so sorry for Naruto, and very sorry for Sakura. This fanfiction carries a lot of emotion, even if it's a bit angsty at first. ;D I love this fanfiction and you, as the author of it, to bits, so don't ever think about giving this one up, kay? ^__^ I hope they all find happiness in the end. :)

~Akire
person MLL
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that this is one of THE best stories I have read out there of Sasuke and Naruto. Seriously. I, myself love to read angsty stories as well as write them of Sasuke and Naruto and this is a truly good story with concepts that I just love. Certainly, this fic deserves much much more reviews. :)
person Kori Nibiki
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't cry, but my heart is wrenching in pain. Please don't tell me that is the last chapter.
person Nanami-chan (lazy ass wont sign in...)
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(The last chapter amost made me cry not quiet but close!)
(Its ironic the bad memorys came from a lake... thats kinda what happened in my fanfic -swears she hadnt read this when she wrote that-)
Its a lovely story... I even gave the link to some people... Poor Sasuke... and Naru... this fic is reminding me of myself... Naru giving up his happiness for others... Sasuke loveing someone who wont love him back (Course luck for him .. even tho Naru has yet to say it... he does love him... unlike in my case ^_^) Its kinda creepy actually...

Sakura isnt going to be really stupid and not notice whats going on right? I hate when she doesnt notice... -hugs sakura- dont worry I will be here for you -snuggles Sakura- Sasuke and Naru can have a relationship and I will steal Sakura ^_^

Your story is very well written, I love the length of your chapters... (couse ive been reading it for the last 3 days, keeping in mind im not always at the computer or im talkign to people ect. ect.)

I want to be added to the mailing list!!!
Monkeystalk2me69@netscape.net
person NotTelling
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe I'm just in a depressed mood, but I sure as hell cried. Of course, it didn't really hit me until I realized that there was no button to go to the next chapter, as that was the last one posted. This is such a GREAT story. You keep all the characters with in character (yes, there is some OOC but it is enjoyable and not at all unreasonable... I dono if I would even call it OOC more or less characters just being in different situations). Your plot development is fantastic - I don't think I've ever seen it paralled in a non-(officially)published work. But the angst is killing me! You gotta keep posting! Please! I beg of you, on one knee..... with chocolate pocky..... or strawberry.... or anything else that you could ask for! You just got to get them together. (And by the way - on a more perverse note - very well done lemon.) Great story. Write more.