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... i dont think i could survive reading this version of your fic. i read it of ffnet and i almost died then. but i love this fic anyway

OOOOOOHHHH so saaaaaaaaaaaaaaddddddd!!!T_T
Just wonderful!! It's one of the best Naruto's or better one of the best fanfiction I've ever read!!!Oh just go on!!!
It's a pleasure to read english with this text!^^
Next chapter pleeeaaassseee!!!

that was great! hope you undate soon!

I did not find it sad either,I found it totally senceless there was no way that I can see Naruto turning down Sasuke after all that,basicly he is putting Sakura ahead of Sasuke and himself, threw away the love and respect he has always faught for.It felt like the writer just ignored their own characters to be depressing and d r a g everything out.Very frustrating,very.If the story to this point had not been captivating on many levels It would not matter.By caring more about Sakura's tears than Sasukes Naruto is showing he has more love for her than Sasuke and is being disrespectful and very cruel to Sasuke by insisting he breed her and that he doesn't know his own mind by loving Naruto.I feel very sorry for Sasuke.if I were him I would be suicidaly depressed.As for Sakura, she doesn't love him she is obsessed and is mentally ill or the most ruthless selfish creep around,Gods,doesn't she hear the word "no"?I hope she gets a restraining order slapped on her,hounding someone like that then bawling for sympathy,she didn't tell anyone she pressured him and knows he doesn't want her and has never pretended otherwise and when he was mentally down she struck and got the engagement ring.Ruthless,utterly.I like Sakura some what but if this version of her was a mAn doing these sick things you know it would be a bad guy,she has no innocence just an all encompassing compulltion. to have Sasuke's attention no matter what the cost to him..take a pill sister, get help,quick.Yeah the chapter ending and Naruto's reaction where way out of left feild,like the writer decided to change the ending ,very confusing.

I got the impression from another reveiw that this is a death fic.If that is true and you put up no warning I for one will be pissed cause that is sneaky.The lemon was wild so I hope I am wrong and this ends with a great one.Thank You.

thats not the end. is it? please tell me it isn't... please... BUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

agh! so much agnst! ( I love it!- but I still demand a happy ending!!!)

OMG! that was so sad. i was crying even before it got to the really sad part. i hope that sasuke and naruto end up together. that has got to be the saddest thing i've ever read before!! i hope the next chapter comes out soon!!

*sniff* OMG i have freaken tears running down my face, evil, evil author!! But please please update soon, poor Sauske and stupid Naruto, stupid stupid. Ahhhh

Any way i love the story, i thought it was just going to be another mushy happy endings after Sauske confessed his love, but you twisted that and i love it, great plot, ^__^ Still, i do want to see my two favorite characters together, OH and btw, since i read straight through all 15 chapters without leaving anyother comments, great lemon in chapter 10, believe me i've read enough and yours was increadible, very hot! *is jealous of your talent*

Thank you for writing such a great story and please write more soon
^__^

Bara

Is this the end? I certainly hope not, but it seems like a place someone cruel might end it(Ihope thats not you -.-). This chapter was sad, but it wasn't so sad as to make me cry, and OOC is just fine when it works well. I just hope it has a happy ending, because they don't deserve this. Lol, because I actually know them and they don't deserve this kind of pain X). I think i've cracked too-no sleep is not a good thing. Anyway I hope you update again soon, because I want to see whats going to happen. Ciao!