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OMG! I love this story! You need to continue on with it. Seriously, you've had me in tears, and I DO NOT CRY! Come on! I want to know what's going to happen! Great story, btw, I'll add some compliments in here along with my whining. I'm very impressed and I love the situation you put them in. Evil, Evil! Though frustrating, I feel that by having the two boys/men being at conflict w. their emotions for the other, is more realistic and much better fit for such a story. Again, you're doing such a great job, and I would hate for it to just leave off there.

Again, awesome job!

Until Next Time...

Scottishfae

This is wonderful and I think it deserves far more reviews!!! U less of course, you've been bombarded by email ^^

I can't believe you jst stopped there!!! Just when it was getting good!!! When Naruto and Sasuke were just about to jump each other and hump each other senseless!! I was hoping to find a breathtaking, long finished fic in the back pages of the archive of adultfanfiction.... this is breathtaking... breathtakingly wonderful, and it's got nice long chapters too... BUT IT'S NOT FINISHED!!! T.T I won't give up on this fiction!! Update! Update! Update!!

Sasuke and Naruto will get together in the end right? They better.. I'm not that fond of SasuSaku ^^;; Sakura always has Lee to fall back on hehe.

Well... This is a superb piece of writing and I do hope you update as quickly as possible. Hopefully, my review has motivated you to get your ass working =p ^^

Ciao
Fi

NOOO!!!! I just read one of your reviews... SASUKES GONNA DIE?!?!?!?!?!?

*cries insanely*

Stoopid spoiler review =p... Ah well... I'll just have to see what exactly happens ^^ Update this soon!

kiwi
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Please write more!!! i love the sex scene, it wasn't bad at all!!! Love love love please write more, i'll be waiting...if possible please write more lemon scenes....WOOOOOO!!!!!!it was awesome!!!

...update...please...I MUST know whats going to happen. Please ;_; *begs you...PLEADS with you*

God, I love this fic way too much. I will be sad if this is never finished ;____; terribly, terribly sad.

Muahaha! *cough* Pure evil I say! *meh* Wonderful cliffhanger by the way, you have a nack with those. Thank you for the wonderful update...love those updates. *grins madly*

Firstly, before the fangirl praise, yes, I did notice the ooc-ness, not so much in Sasuke (oddly enough) but in Naruto. Wow, somehow I can imagine Sasuke breaking down for some things...its been proven in the anime after all...however, Naruto being so damn clueless...*sighs* Don't worry, my frustration isn't directed at you *bows* its at the character of said baka. *humphs* Somtimes I want to thump him on the head, and tell him to stop second-guessing himself. Ahh well...that makes for a good, angsty fanfiction ne? ^_^

Now for the praise...I...love....this...chapter! *sighs contented-gives you some pocky* I love how this ended...Yes, I don't mind angst. I'm a scary fangirl. *winks* I don't recall when the last time you updated was, but I'm thinking it was some time ago (could I have seen the date wrong? >_<) thus I hope you haven't abandoned this fic...tho...I can't complain much as I'm a writer myself, and know the stresses of keeping pesky fangirls pleased on a monthly basis. *smerk* Either way, I'm looking forward to seeing how you continue this story if it pleases you to continue with it. Much luck in life & writing...

One of the(or THE) best fics I've ever read!!!!>_