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Ok update I demand you to!!!!!! This is a beautifully written story and you have captured Naruto's innocence down to a T. SO write more!!! now!!

@_@ My goodness, the best NarutoSuke fic I think I've read yet! Mind you I'm still somewhat new to reading them, as watched/read the entire series up to date within one week, but this is so well done! ve tve the way you write it, and I think it really is in character for Sasuke to be that way. The only person who would see it would be Naruto, of course. Just... I don't know, this is a really amazing fanfiction, you have all of the characters down so well, Naruto's guilt and suffering.
-_-; but that cliffhanger last chapter is REALLY mean.
<.< Sakura should have figured out that she doesn't need to love anyone to be happy by now >.> it's not really all that hard. Then she should let Sasuke and Naruto run off, whoot ^^;, I'm so mean... but they make so much more sense.
Ohh, and the lemon chapter? That was really the first one you wrote?! ::shock:: Honestly, it had to be one of the best I've read out of any pairing, and for this one, it was just about perfect. Sure, it was a little agressive for Sasuke, so maybe he wouldn't be quite that extreme, but he sure does have a thing about being the one in control, don't he? Hehe, but I liked it a lot, I've re-read that chapter a few times already.
Anyways~ good work, it's an awesome fanfic. Too bad I don't have time to review every chapter separatetly, I really would otherwise ; ;.

I really like this. The angst is great and, while you place a lot of focus on SasuNaru, you include a lot about the others too. I think it's nicely developed. Please continue soon. This story owns me. ^_^

YOU ARE EVIL! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

DAMN YOU!!!!! stupid cliffhanger. just when it got sooooo good. this i one of the best naruto stories i ever read. the other one you should check out. it has 50+ chapthers.

yada yada yada, your story is good, blah blah blah, update soon, so on and so forth, and they lived happliy ever after.


a huge fan
kenshinjunkie03

Please do not take this as a flame, but as a valid complaint and a little constructive criticism. I enjoyed this reading this fic immensely, liked every chapter, and even when things started getting silly for the sake of story plot, I still was eager to ren. In. I was waiting for the grand finale to mark this fic as a favorite on FF.Net and I had planned on gushing all over it. HOWEVER, you did not state that this was a DEATH fic and that Sasuke would die. If you had done so, I would have never started to read it in the first place. When I read the end of this fic, I was physically ill. Just like same sex pairings need warnings so as not to offend the reader, so do death fics as some fans have an similar aversion to them. I am one of those fans. I can't even describe how upset I was when I read the final chapter, but I figured that you didn't intend any harm and that your fic just went in that direction so I didn't say anything. I swore I wouldn't review/rant on this fic when you started reposting on FF.Net, but since you are reposting your fic on AFF as well, I can't hold my tongue. You *know* the ending already, you've already written it, so now by not saying anything you are being really unfair and disrespectful to the readers on this site. Please label your warnings correctly!!!

I'm not saying that you shouldn't write death fics, or that you should be criticized for writing them; I'm saying that you should cly sly state CHARACTER DEATH both in your author's notes *and* in the story synopsis so that readers who don't like those kinds of fics won't read them. If they do and then they complain, then that's just silly, and yeah I *know* there are readers out there that do that, but some of us don't go looking for a fight; some of us just want to enjoy the fics that you guys are talented enough to write and generous enough to share.

Please don't punish readers like us with such a nasty surprise like your ending. (T~T)

I knew that was coming. XD
Can't wait for the next chapter (Naruto's reaction~! GASP). WRITE WRITE WRITE!!! GO GO GO!!! *threatens with Ancient Chinese Fan of DOOM!*

Yess! Yess!! Yatta!!!!! Finally Sasuke told him! Gad! This is sooooooooo to much happiness! *giddy, giddy*
I feel sorry for Sakura though...And what is Naruto going to do ^^
Glomp Sasuke!
Ooooh.... I feel bad fo rhim, he is going to get soooooo moody over Sakura.......
PLeasepleaseplease!!!! another chap! I'm dying here!

Nice chap! One..An..Another one! Now! I'm So addicted to this fic^^ hehe.......

OMG!!!! Update soon please!!!! I am so into this story! I love the plot and the depth you added to the characters! (Well, Naruto being my fav anime and manga helps with that a little... hehe.) In any case, I must know what happens with Sasuke and Naruto! And I must know what happened when Sasuke left 5 years ago! So Please update soon!! Pweez! (Pouts like a puppy.)